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[@TheWindel]

The personal formatting choice threw me off, as did the use of modifying the template image that served as a placeholder. You didn’t need to insert your FC in there, but neither of these things will affect your review in any shape or form. 

Konohe Junko seems fine enough, but there are a few things me and Pirouette were discussing we’d like to see elaborated on or added into the sheet before we accept it into the cast of the roleplay. I’ll throw the softball thoughts first so we can get those out of the way. As it currently stands, I don’t see much of a mention of her physical description beyond her casual attire and her gas-mask. What about her height? Explaining or describing her inverted pupils? I’d like to see these things so I can reference things when it comes to the classrooms; to help me visualize the student population. I guess that leaves some of the non-softball issues. 
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That's just to be fancy in formatting her CS.

I didn't think the inverted pupils needed much explanation, lest they be mistaked for some kind of magic usage, but I can add some small things in like height and what not.

[quote=@Inkarnate]
My biggest worry with this is well, this is an assertion that feels more reflective of the progression of a [i]villain[/i]. We want to define heroes here, though there is room for changing thinking processes and some would-be heroes might be more brutal than others in their personal philosophy. But there’s nothing in your character’s backstory to indicate where this end goal comes from nor is there any indication of why this goal is important to the character. Characters that are brutal and obtuse in their heroic thinking exist in the canon (such as Katsuki Bakugo) so this is something we can potentially work around if there are proper elaborations and edits.

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From what I've read up on, there's a student character in the series who uses explosions. Explosions aren't exactly heroic either, yet he's learning to be a hero. I could be wrong, but I figured a Quirk could go either way; that is to say, a Quirk can appear villainous but be used for good intentions. Likewise, the same could apply for the inverse. Furthermore, this section of the CS skeleton made no mention that this had to be relating back to the character's backstory; instead, it talked about what our personal thoughts for the character were going forward. Unless I misread something. If you still want a relation to her backstory, I can make one.

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This kind of reads problematic to me and I think the assertion that on a player-to-GM basis is probably unfitting. We need to make sure everyone is collaborative here and wants to work together to create something. If this is just awkwardly phrased then I apologize for jumping down your throat but I am very worried about these kind of things given the nature of these roleplays. 

I want to give Junko a fair shake, I do. But these are some of my thoughts that I want addressed.

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As I said, that's what I want in terms of her final power set and what I would like to achieve through the progress of the RP. If that's not possible, then I'm afraid I'm going to have to make a new character then since this is the route I'd like to take. With that in mind, I don't plan to make her a straight villain; once again, from my understanding a Quirk can appear villainous but be used for good. Besides, I expect there to be a long time before even getting to that point anyway. Furthermore, I meant no harm in my words but it is something I won't budge on but instead can be worked with in flexibility.