So, as a way to introduce everyone to how I grade sheets;

[list][*] Take what I say with a grain of salt. Just because I mock your sheet a little bit doesn't mean it's awful -- my own sheets deserve mocking too.
[*] I can point out some flaws that I'd like for you to fix but that doesn't mean I automatically reject your sheet (and in some cases I'll trust that you'll make the edits and accept it on the spots, allowing you to place it in the character sheet area after editing it without having me re-check it).
[*] Reviews will always be in red because it fucking pops like a motherfucker [color=red]just like me baby[/color].[/list]

Let's start. [COlor=red]Review in red.[/color]

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[hider=Shiru Metsumi][center][h3][b][color=black]知王 - 滅実
Shiru Metsumi[/color][/b][/h3][COlor=red][b]good name[/b][/color][b]“You can always get better at anything - but not unless you know!”[/b] [COlor=red][b]i know[/b][/color]

[hider=Reference Images]Images are a few years old, taken when Metsumi was twelve.[COlor=red][b]looks fine[/b][/color]

She apparently has a preference for traditional clothing even now.
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Caught snacking on something messy. [COlor=red][b]so you learn to fight but you can't even eat properly damn[/b][/color]
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[indent][color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Name:[/b][indent]Shiru Metsumi[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Clan:[/b][indent]Shiru[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Rank:[/b][indent]Genin[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Sex:[/b][indent]♀[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Sex appearance:[/b][indent]♀[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Age:[/b][indent]14 years old.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Sexuality:[/b][indent]Not yet manifested, presumed heterosexual.[/indent] [COlor=red][b]presumed. hehe u gay... xd[/b][/color]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Birthplace:[/b][indent][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/5b/Amegakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222820[/img]	Amegakure no Sato[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Village:[/b][indent][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/5b/Amegakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222820[/img]	Amegakure no Sato[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Affiliations:[/b][indent][color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Shiru Clan
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Amegakure no Sato
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Amegakure Secure Archive Library
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	啓発 - Keihatsu, a paper lantern store local to Amegakure.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Chakra natures:[/b][indent][b]Primary nature:[/b][indent][i][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img]	Raiton.[/i][/indent]
[b]Secondary nature:[/b][indent][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img]	[i]Katon.[/i] Affinity presently not manifest.[/indent] [COlor=red][b]ok[/b][/color]
[b]Tertiary nature:[/b][indent][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img]	[i]Fūton.[/i] Affinity presently not manifest.[/indent][/indent] [COlor=red][b]ditto[/b][/color]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Distinctive Qualities:[/b][indent]Possesses two complex Fūinjutsu seals on the palms of her hands. Their appearance seems to have changed with time, possibly due to modifications. While they appear to be regular black-ink tattoos, they seem to permeate the structure of her hands, and the linework is present even beneath her skin and on top of various muscles in her hands.[/indent] [COlor=red][b]so anyone can see these -- now you'll know who read your sheet and who doesn't :^)[/b][/color]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Wardrobe:[/b][indent]Metsumi displays a marked preference for traditional formal-wear when not training or out in the field. One of her favored outfits is a dark haori worn over a green kasode with dyed, multicolored brocades of trees, along with a short obi and a tan hakama. [COlor=red][b]no idea what any of those are -- sounds good though[/b][/color] As she is the eldest child of the well-off Shiru clan main family, many of her outfits are rather ornate. When training or in the field, she prefers to wear dark or green shorts and a light tan jacket with several pockets and pouches for carrying small items. [COlor=red][b]hmmmmmmm so she's a bratty little princess eldest daughter to a rich boy clan... hm,...... found a new target to bully[/b][/color][/indent][/indent]

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[h3][b]Biography[/b][/h3]
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[hider=History]Metsumi was born to the main family of the Shiru clan [COlor=red][b]the clan has branches?[/b][/color], the eldest daughter of Kizu and Honō Shiru, the clan Patriarch and Matriarch respectively. As is the case with most children of the Shiru clan, Metsumi's childhood was unpleasant and difficult, trained in the home rather than at the Genin academy and subjected to a cruel training regime specially devised to hone her ability with Fūinjutsu, as well as to prepare her for preserving the clan Hiden [COlor=red][b]something that came to mind -- maybe they use a fuinjutsu like the cursed hyuga mark to protect their hiden. we have some evidence of speech-impeding seals from Root, so it's not entirely unlikely, if not downright expected that these guys have a similar fuinjutsu that stops clan members from teaching the skill to others.[/b][/color]. The methods used by the clan in their training are not known by most; but what is no secret are the effects it has upon their young. Most Shiru children from both the main and branch families are known for their skittishness, hyper-vigilance, and tendency to suffer abrupt panic attacks. Metsumi, either by happenstance or intent, went through the secret clan trials and came out with a remarkably cheery disposition and far better adjustment than was due, although even to this day she is known to suffer from sudden bouts of inexplicable anxiety. There are as many theories claiming that she was babied and shielded from the true rigors of the clan trials, but just as many theories stating that she is a natural prodigy and simply was not as greatly affected by the trials due to her inherently resolute will. [COlor=red][b]I like the ambiguity here and that you let readers decide which -- great quality[/b][/color]

Metsumi did not attend the Amegakure Genin Academy, as the Shiru clan has always insisted on training their own children at home under their personal supervision, and she only ever came to the academy in order to take and pass the Genin exam. As a result, Metsumi treats almost everyone she meets with a sense of familiarity that most would consider rude or intrusive, while also seeming to be more childish and less aware of social mores and customs expected of most in Amegakure. [COlor=red][b]more reasons for a good bullying[/b][/color]

As the heiress to the Shiru family's knowledge, she possesses a knowledge of Fūinjutsu that eclipses that of even most Jōnin, even if she lacks the Chakra reserves, discipline, and experience to make use of most of it. Her ability to memorize detailed, complex information is impressive, despite what her seemingly absent-minded demeanor would suggest. She tends to soak in the details of her surroundings, rarely forgetting a name or face. However, she is also somewhat gullible, perhaps inadvisably so. She might not believe a calmly-stated claim that the sky is falling, but she might believe it if a pedestrian shouted it at the top of their lungs while waving their arms around. [COlor=red][b]good to know[/b][/color][/hider]

[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Personality:[/b]
[color=green]✓[/color]	[b]Sunny Disposition[/b][indent][i]Metsumi possesses an unflappable cheeriness and sense of contentment that is difficult to dissuade. She is a stalwart optimist who can always find the silver lining in a situation, and always tries to make the best of a bad arrangement. She also recovers quickly from sadness and stress. [COlor=red][b]so the stress of a mission will only have short term effects (like anxiety) but long-term she'll eventually get over it (not forget because she has good memory)[/b][/color][/i][/indent]
[color=green]✓[/color]	[b]Social Butterfly[/b][indent][i]Metsumi is a pleasing companion who always supports their friends, even in trying and harsh times [COlor=red][b]OK naruto we know friendship is how you kill a ten-tails but calm down ok?[/b][/color]. She can also get along with very nearly anyone, from members of the hot-headed Furaribi clan to the stingiest, greediest vendor in the damp streets.[/i][/indent]
[color=green]✓[/color]	[b]Inquisitive[/b][indent][i]Perhaps due in part to the rigors of her upbringing, Metsumi soaks up the details of her surrounding environment, and likes to explore the unknown and inspect new things. She also makes for a good listener, and can remember nearly anything she is told or overhears.[/i][/indent]
[color=red]✗[/color]	[b]Unintentionally Rude[/b][indent][i]Since she did not really get out much and has limited interactions with people outside her family, she tends to treat everyone she meets with a familiar tone and aspect that most would find offensive. By way of example, coming from a well-to-do family, she is somewhat careless with the belongings of others and has been known to borrow them without asking.[/i] [COlor=red][b]she really out here trying to get beat up by random people. why don't the clan heads put a stop to her idiotic behaviour? (i dont want an actual answer, i'm just wondering -- maybe she was babied after all[/b][/color][/indent]
[color=red]✗[/color]	[b]Gullible[/b][indent][i]Unless she possesses knowledge to the contrary, Metsumi is more likely than not to believe any reasonable statement provided to her or that she happens to overhear.[/i][/indent]
[color=red]✗[/color]	[b]Hidden Anguish[/b][indent][i]For unknown reasons, and without any seeming cause, Metsumi suffers from occasional anxiety attacks. She can bounce back from them quickly after the fact, but there are periods where she can become a heaving, hopeless wreck. [COlor=red][b]like mid-mission ehehehehe[/b][/color][/i][/indent]

[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Dreams and hopes:[/b][indent][color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To discover the cause of and cure her anxiety. [COlor=red][b]repressed child trauma[/b][/color]
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To continue studying Fūinjutsu, and to eventually develop novel seals, like her Mother [COlor=red][b]mother capital M, not mother........ hmmmmmmmm interedasting[/b][/color] before her.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To uphold the pride and repute of the Shiru clan.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To train hard and become a Chūnin.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Desires:[/b][indent][color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Freedom from uncertainty and doubt.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To be known for her cleverness and ingenuity - which remain unproven. [COlor=red][b]major cause being her social moronic behaviour -- gotta be clever to be socially capable and being best buds with everyone isn't just about being a butterfly (i saw what you did there by the way) it's also about being clever when you need to but that's just my tea that i'm inserting here[/b][/color]
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To establish some independence for herself apart from her family.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	To impress her sensei with her Fūinjutsu.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Fears:[/b][indent][color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Her inexplicable and crippling anxiety attacks.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Her parents, whom she loves but finds terrifying.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Upsetting or disappointing her sensei, whom she desperately wants to impress.
[color=gray]ｘ[/color]	Making a mistake or error in front of everyone.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Motivations:[/b][indent]Metsumi is driven primarily by her inquisitive nature and her desire to explore her boundaries of understanding, not only in Fūinjutsu but in all of the Shinobi arts. She loves encountering unknown things and likes to tackle new challenges and problems - and so her foremost drive is inwards, to discover the cause of her own terror and uncertainty, and to extinguish it. She feels in utter control of her life, and is infuriated with herself for experiencing such moments of weakness for no apparent reason. She wants to grow stronger and more knowledgeable in order to purge herself of frailty.[/indent]

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[h3][b]Military[/b][/h3]
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[color=gray]▸[/color][indent][b]Hiden Technique:[/b] The Shiru clan lacks any kind of bloodline limit, and instead is known for their expertise in Fūinjutsu and for the secret, closely guarded, intricate and tremendously complex hand-sealing technique used amongst their own family, which itself grants access to a method enabled by the seal itself - the Butterfly Hand Seal. The Hiden Fūinjutsu technique itself ultimately hails from the period when the Shiru clan still resided in the now long-lost Uzushiogakure no Sato - and as tends to be the case with such old and advanced techniques, its uses and workings survive only in the oral tradition of the Shiru family.[/indent]

[hider=Butterfly Hand Seal][hider=Description]The Butterfly Hand Seal is a Fūinjutsu performed upon members of the Shiru clan shortly after birth, reinforced and developed over the course of their development by their parents and the clan elders. The Fūinjutsu is performed upon the palms of the hands, creating a number of focal points which act to shape and manipulate chakra in specific ways, while also reshaping the subject's Meridian system around the fingers, hands, wrists, and lower arms, corresponding to the arrangement of focal points. Over time, the Tenketsu of those with hands sealed in this manner become altered; members of the Shiru clan have 401 Tenketsu versus the standard 361, and the extra 40 Tenketsu points are all concentrated in their lower arms, hands, and fingers. The function of the hand seal is deceptively simple; when Chakra is shunted through one of the affected Tenketsu, it is automatically reshaped and molded in a fashion corresponding to an ordinary hand seal (Rat, Ox, Tiger, etc.) without the user having to actively do so themselves. This can be done in patterned pulses extremely quickly, meaning that even incredibly complex techniques ordinarily requiring dozens of hand seals (such as the [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release%3A_Water_Dragon_Bullet_Technique]Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique[/url]) to use can be performed with one seal by a user of the Butterfly Hand Seal. The technique itself derives its very name from the shape the hands take when bringing them together in order to use the seals in both hands - palms pressed together, fingers and thumbs splayed and bent outwards, resembling a perched butterfly. [COlor=red][b]if they hold their hands up when doing the seal against the sunlight there's a nice shadow play uwu so cool[/b][/color]

The technique itself is not limited to reshaping chakra according to only the twelve basic hand seals, but is also capable of reshaping it according to the five element hand seals and possesses an unknown number of variations beyond those. These variations allow them to manipulate chakra in immensely complex ways, and in theory a user of the Butterfly Hand Seal could shape Chakra similarly to unique hand seals used in non-bloodline techniques, as long as the user perfectly understood the methodology of the technique in question. [COlor=red][b]to clarify for readers: theoretically they can copy but because they lack knowledge of how the technique works internally (i.e. how do you shape the chakra and what do you do with it) they cannae do this[/b][/color]

Because of the near-instantaneous manner in which Chakra is shaped and molded by a user of the Butterfly Hand Seal, and since its use requires only a single hand seal, it is effectively impossible to predict or recognize what move a member of the Shiru clan is about to use based on the movement of their hands, or even by examining their chakra as it is reshaped. [COlor=red][b]which was already hard -- the use of the tiger seal is so common place that you don't know whether they're gonna try to dispel a genjutsu or activate a byakugan. point is, this is less of a strength than it seems though it certainly is one to keep in account[/b][/color]

Use of the Butterfly Hand Seal does not obviate the need for members of the Shiru clan to study, memorize, and even perform ordinary hand seals. As a matter of course, they still must practice the standard hand seals as well as others, memorizing their use and understanding how and why they are used so that they understand how to use the Butterfly Hand Seal. If a member of the Shiru clan does not possess a mastery of this fundamental knowledge, they will not know how or when to channel Chakra through their arms properly, rendering the Butterfly Hand Seal useless, as the original intent of the technique was to optimize the efficient use of complex techniques by those who already possessed mastery of Chakra control. [COlor=red][b]effectively meaning they are misappropriating the fuinjutsu since it wasn't meant for young children/genin but for jonin level people who have utterly mastered their ninjutsu and want to diminish the amount of seals they need to use[/b][/color] Similarly, the clan's singular reliance upon the Butterfly Hand Seal makes training them in most techniques difficult, since they have to translate the ordinary method for using any given technique through their own unique methodology before they can use it reliably. [COlor=red][b]so what that means is... they can learn a new technique but not master it well enough to use it with the butterfly seal. they could still perform that technique [i]normally[/i] but it would require more time than to use the butterfly seal. using that technique more often gives them a better understanding of the technique -> this means they can start using it with the butterfly seal.[/b][/color]

As a consequence of this, members of the Shiru clan are infamous for their ability to eventually use nearly all of their fully trained techniques without even having to use any hand signs whatsoever, using multiple techniques simultaneously (practically they still must perform techniques one after the other, but they perform them so rapidly that they can seem simultaneous), and even earlier on in their lives of being able to perform one-handed seals. In general, members of the Shiru clan are also well known for their nigh-peerless chakra control. [COlor=red][b]would make for perfect medical nin[/b][/color][/hider]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Strengths:[/b][indent][list][*]Perform any non-Bloodline technique that has been learned with a single hand seal. Able to perform non-Bloodline techniques that use otherwise unique hand seals as long as they have learned the actual technique, and fully understand the underlying principles of that technique and how Chakra needs to be shaped to perform it.[/list]
[list][*]Techniques cannot be copied or predicted by physical observation of movement or Chakra, though certain other methods of mimicry or prediction - or methods that are sufficiently specialized - might be able to.[/list]
[list][*]Encourages (relatively) rapid mastery of chakra control, enabling eventual frequent use of one-handed seals or no seals at all while employing techniques, as well as the rapid, near-simultaneous use of multiple techniques at once.[/list][/indent] [COlor=red][b]yeah i believe all of this w/e, we went over this[/b][/color]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent][list][*]Complex Fūinjutsu seals on the palms of the hand can be disrupted or damaged by various means. Will not actually stop the use of moves since their physical Tenketsu are still there, but it will definitely distract the user and disrupt techniques since the disrupted seal will conflict with the way the Tenketsu shape Chakra. [COlor=red][b]great -- gives enemies a focal point to attack[/b][/color][/list]
[list][*]Additional Tenketsu all clustered in the lower arms and hands makes these regions especially vulnerable to Chakra disruption.[/list]
[list][*]The Butterfly Hand Seal is an odd-numbered Fūinjutsu technique, overlaying it with an even-numbered Fūinjutsu move would likely completely prevent the user from employing most techniques on top of disrupting their Chakra control - though it should be noted, as the Shiru clan are renowned for their expertise in Fūinjutsu they would likely be able to counter such a ploy in short order.[/list]
[list][*]Sensory Gengetsu used for numbing the senses or creating illusions can significantly impede a Butterfly Hand Seal user; whereas any other Shinobi could always fall back on the inherent reliability of standard hand seals to shape Chakra properly, a Butterfly Hand Seal user has no immediately obvious tells associated with their hand gestures that reveal they are being affected by Genjutsu designed to trip up a Shinobi's use of techniques. Similarly, although an advanced user of the Butterfly Hand Seal can rapidly use multiple techniques nearly simultaneously at higher levels of skill, they still have to be able to perceive their target. Gengetsu, in general, is an effective way to prevent them from unleashing a deluge of techniques. Methods of concealment, misdirection, or sensory manipulation or also effective for the same reason.[/list]
[list][*]Most users still typically have to at least press their hands together to use jutsu, and nobody in the Shiru clan is known for being particularly physically strong, even if they regularly engage in taijutsu. Putting them into any kind of arm-lock can shut them down in short order. Since they rely to an almost singular degree upon use of the Hand Seal, partly damaging or maiming even one arm enough to prevent them from using it will effectively remove them as a threat.[/list]
[list][*]S[/list][/indent][COlor=red][b]great[/b][/color][/hider]

[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]S-rank Techniques[/b][indent]None.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]A-rank Techniques[/b][indent]None.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]B-rank Techniques[/b][indent]None.[/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]C-rank Techniques[/b][indent][list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Finger_Carving_Seal]Finger Carving Seal[/url][/list] [COlor=red][b]cool. useless but cool. like just bring a pencil lmao[/b][/color]
[list][*]Barrier Seal[/list] A technique in the same vein of the [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Three-Seal_Barrier]Three-Seal Barrier[/url] [COlor=red][b]typically i dont accept game jutsu (since they're weird and don't match canon) but you made it into a custom based on it so that's perfect -- actually that's how i usually ask people to do it.[/b][/color], a Barrier Seal can reinforce an inert object with Chakra to make its removal more difficult, to alert the user of its break, or even to obscure an object. A versatile technique. [COlor=red][b]nice -- utility fuinjutsu is always fun, especially if they're simple but effective[/b][/color][/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]D-rank Techniques[/b]
[list][*][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img]	Lesser Arc-Lightning Seal[/list][indent]Using principles similar to the [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Lightning_Rod]Lightning Rod[/url] release technique, the Arc-Lightning Seal is a melee technique that acts as a lightning rod, attracting Raiton moves directly to it. Used in conjunction with Body Discharge, Metsumi can strike opponents tagged with the seal with an arc of lightning that leaps directly from her body to theirs, curving through the air if necessary to hit the target. There is a limit to the effective range of this technique that scales with the chakra put into it and Raiton move being used, and necessarily while Raiton moves will zero in on the seal they will not take ridiculous zig-zag routes, nor will they guide themselves around obstacles to hit the seal. The seal itself, not being dependent upon either the user's nor the victim's Chakra, is nearly impossible to remove short of severe mutilation without using an Unsealing technique of equal or greater power - but, by design, it will vanish once struck by any Raiton move. Even exceedingly weak Raiton moves, or even from a brush with static electricity. More potent versions of this technique exist that remain upon the victim even after being struck multiple times, but Metsumi has yet to learn any. [COlor=red][b]obvious weakness here is to not use raiton -- i approve it's fine[/b][/color][/indent]
[list][*][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img]	[url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Body_Discharge]Body Discharge[/url] [COlor=red][b]it says page deleted[/b][/color][/list]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Enclosing_Technique]Enclosing[/url] & [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Unsealing_Technique]Unsealing Technique[/url] [COlor=red][b]wow really? jk to be expected that this was on here -- you didn't really need to add it since it's expected to be, well, common for fuinjutsu users[/b][/color][/list]
[list][*]Two Elements Seal & Unseal[/list][indent]A similar, weaker child to the [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Seal]Five Elements Seal[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Unseal]& Unseal techniques[/url], the Two Elements Seal is an even-numbered melee Fūinjutsu intended to disrupt the Chakra control of those affected, as well as to negate the effects of any odd-numbered Fūinjutsu seals of equal or lesser power. Unlike the derived Emblem Seal techniques, Element Seals are typically permanent unless unsealed as they do not rely upon the Chakra of the user to function, and barring severe mutilation this can usually only be done using an Unsealing technique of equivalent or greater strength. However, unlike the much more powerful Five Elements Seal, the Two and Solitary Elements Seals can both be 'burnt out' simply by exerting a large enough burst of Chakra at once directed at overwhelming the seal. This is somewhat easier said than done of course, since the Element Seals disrupt Chakra control, making its use more difficult and strenuous. [COlor=red][b]ok[/b][/color][/indent]
[list][*]Two Emblem Seal[/list][indent]Designed as a more immediately useful battle technique alternative to the Element Seals, the Emblem Seals series is a set of melee Fūinjutsus that inflict sensory pain upon the victim. The number of Emblems on a seal permit the user to inflict pain and distort an equal number of the victim's senses at their own choice; the Two Emblems Seal can therefore disrupt any two senses the user chooses (resulting in blurry vision, impaired hearing, numbed sensation, etc.) while also inflicting pain upon the victim via those same senses. However, the Emblem Seals series are temporary, unlike the Element Seals, and rely upon an amount of Chakra invested in them by the user to continue functioning [COlor=red][b]continued touch to put in chakra...? or do they burn out after the chakra is depleted[/b][/color]. When the Chakra infused in them runs out, they vanish. Emblem Seals with additional Emblems also split the amount of Chakra put into them between each Emblem in the seal, meaning higher-numbered Emblem Seals take greater amounts of Chakra to effect all of the senses as greatly as a Solitary Emblem Seal technique might affect one of them using the same amount of Chakra. Like the weaker Element Seals, weaker Emblem Seals can be 'burnt out' by exerting and directing a large enough burst of Chakra at them, but their strength is determined by the amount of Chakra invested in them rather than by the actual number of Emblems present, unlike the Element Seals. They generally cannot be removed by other means save severe mutilation or the use of unsealing techniques of equivalent or greater power. [COlor=red][b]assuming you're gonna be fighting bad guys at some point that severely outpower you, this seems like a great jutsu for the first part of the RP until you start facing down against people who uhh can probably crush you -- might still be useful but the 'break with massive chakra' will become so irrelevant at that point given that most people above chunin just have bazinga-size chakra reserves compared to a genin[/b][/color][/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]E-rank Techniques[/b][list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Body_Flicker_Technique]Body Flicker[/url][/list]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Body_Replacement_Technique]Body Replacement[/url][/list] [COlor=red][b]no real [i]need[/i] to include the genin techniques since you graduated -- expected that you know them[/b][/color]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Clone_Technique]Clone Technique[/url][/list]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cloak_of_Invisibility_Technique]Invisibility Cloak[/url][/list]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rope_Escape_Technique]Rope Escape[/url][/list] [COlor=red][b]rofl[/b][/color]
[list][*]Solitary Element Seal[/list][indent]A similar, weaker child to the [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Seal]Five Elements Seal[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Five_Elements_Unseal]& Unseal techniques[/url], the Solitary Element Seal is an odd-numbered melee Fūinjutsu intended to disrupt the Chakra control of those affected, as well as to negate the effects of any even-numbered Fūinjutsu seals of equal or lesser power. Unlike the derived Emblem Seal techniques, Element Seals are typically permanent unless unsealed as they do not rely upon the Chakra of the user to function, and barring severe mutilation this can usually only be done using an Unsealing technique of equivalent or greater strength. However, unlike the much more powerful Five Elements Seal, the Two and Solitary Elements Seals can both be 'burnt out' simply by exerting a large enough burst of Chakra at once directed at overwhelming the seal. This is somewhat easier said than done of course, since the Element Seals disrupt Chakra control, making its use more difficult and strenuous.[/indent]
[list][*]Solitary Emblem Seal[/list][indent]Designed as a more immediately useful battle technique alternative to the Element Seals, the Emblem Seals series is a set of melee Fūinjutsus that inflict sensory pain upon the victim. The number of Emblems on a seal permit the user to inflict pain and distort an equal number of the victim's senses at their own choice; the Solitary Emblem Seal can therefore disrupt any one sense the user chooses (resulting in blurry vision, impaired hearing, numbed sensation, etc.) while also inflicting pain upon the victim via that same sense. However, the Emblem Seals series are temporary, unlike the Element Seals, and rely upon an amount of Chakra invested in them by the user to continue functioning. When the Chakra infused in them runs out, they vanish. Emblem Seals with additional Emblems also split the amount of Chakra put into them between each Emblem in the seal, meaning higher-numbered Emblem seals take greater amounts of Chakra to affect all of the senses as greatly as a Solitary Emblem Seal technique might affect one of them using the same amount of Chakra. Like the weaker Element Seals, weaker Emblem Seals can be 'burnt out' by exerting and directing a large enough burst of Chakra at them, but their strength is determined by the amount of Chakra invested in them rather than by the actual number of Emblems present, unlike the Element Seals. They generally cannot be removed by other means save severe mutilation or the use of unsealing techniques of equivalent or greater power. [COlor=red][b]this one and the above are fine though I really wish you'd organized these custom jutsu's a bit better[/b][/color]
[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Transformation_Technique]Transformation Technique[/url][/list][/indent]
[color=gray]▸[/color]	[b]Equipment and weaponry[/b]
[indent]It is to be noted, being a member of a family that specializes in the very techniques necessary to produce sealing scrolls, Metsumi has more of the tools listed here sealed inside scrolls than most other Shinobi would ever consider using even for a lengthy mission. [COlor=red][b]I'm not gonna count shinobi tools during the story so feel free to abuse the fuck out of that so long as it doesn't become blatantly moronic. [/b][/color][/indent]

[list][*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Explosive_Tag]Explosive Tags[/url]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flash_Bomb]Flash &[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Smoke_Bomb]Smoke Bombs[/url]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Military_Rations_Pill]Ration Pills[/url] [COlor=red][b]don't abuse these. it's hilarious that i've had to say this but yeah these got abused in the past. i'd see them more as a flavor object for your genin to eat after he got pummeled a bit than an actual tool in the RP [/b][/color]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Senbon]Senbon[/url]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Tant%C5%8D]Tantō[/url]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Scroll]Various Scrolls[/url]
[*][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sealing_Tag]Various Sealing Tags[/url][/list][/hider]
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[COlor=red][b]So take a look at my comments and change what needs to be changed (if it's just a random comment from my side feel free to just carry on.) I don't really have any specific demands other than asking you kindly if you could organize the custom jutsu like I did in my sheets -- but that's not really a hard demand so much as it's me asking you to go easy on my eyes if I need to look something up for a post. 

Approved. Move to the char sheet area.[/b][/color]