[quote=@Lo][color=red][b]Review in red[/b][/color] [hider=Igarashi Aoi][center][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/075fac23-f3a1-457e-9fb0-fac54f686128.png[/img] [color=red][b]nice editing[/b][/color] [h3][b][color=black]๐™ธ๐š๐šŠ๐š›๐šŠ๐šœ๐š‘๐š’ ๐™ฐ๐š˜๐š’[/color][/b][/h3] [color=black]โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”[/color][/center] [indent][color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Name:[/color][/b][indent]Aoi Igarashi.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Clan:[/color][/b][indent]Igarashi Ichizoku. [color=red][b]the grammar is incorrect reee[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Rank:[/color][/b][indent]Genin.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Sex:[/color][/b][indent][color=pink]โ™€[/color] Female.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Sex appearance:[/color][/b][indent][color=pink]โ™€[/color] Female ([s]A pretty one at that[/s] [color=red][b]i'll be the judge of that[/b][/color]).[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Age:[/color][/b][indent]13 years old.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Age appearance:[/color][/b][indent]Teenager.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Sexuality:[/color][/b][indent]Straight.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Birthplace:[/color][/b][indent][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/5b/Amegakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222820[/img] Amegakure.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Village:[/color][/b][indent][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/5b/Amegakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222820[/img] Amegakure.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Affiliations:[/color][/b][indent][color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Herself. [color=red][b]oo edgy[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Amegakure's Shinobi Forces.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Chakra natures:[/color][/b] [indent][b]Primary nature:[/b][indent][i] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] Raiton.[/i][/indent][b]Secondary nature:[/b][indent]None.[/indent][b]Tertiary nature:[/b][indent]None.[/indent][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Appearance:[/color][/b][indent]Years of training led the young kunoichi to develop a strong athletic body. With striking features, such as her sharp eyes and overally sharp expression that appears to be a constant glare make her stand out as someone intimidating to most who are not used to her [color=red][b]kinda depends on the person but if those are her features then there are probably some who find her intimidating[/b][/color]. Her jetblack hair is often tied in a bun, with two bangs framing her face evenly. Her eyes are dark and her long eyelashes make them rather distinct to look at. [/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Wardrobe:[/color][/b][indent]Her attire of choice consists of an orange shirt with a black top underneath, loose pants tied with bandages on the waist, a pair of black gloves that end just before the elbow with a white wrappings and knee-high black shinobi sandals.[/indent][/indent] [center][color=black] โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€” [h3][b]Biography[/b][/h3][img]https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/448952038483689492/450358721332248576/sun.png[/img] โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”[/color][/center] [indent][color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]History:[/color][/b][indent] The [color=gray][b]Igarashi clan[/b][/color] is not a glorified clan, they are not rich and their situation is the same as any other clan that lives within Amegakure [color=red][b]good -- even the richest clan are still dirt poor compared to Konohagakure's elitist gang of noble bandits[/b][/color]. They struggle, but they get around by possessing a selection of good, reliable and well-known shinobi under their name; The Igarashi, otherwise referred to as the Storm-clan of Amegakure, have been serving the same village for many years and will likely continue to do so for the remaining eternity. Their loyalty is their most precious trait and it lies totally and completely within Amegakure: It was enough to put a number of their members into a secretive organization known as Atarashi no Shugo-sha (ๅตใฎๅฎˆ่ญท่€…), the Stormguardians - some may claim that the organization's name was even derived from their clan itself, but that's merely a rumor and has been never confirmed [color=red][b]it's not but keep patting yourself on the back[/b][/color]. The birth of Igarashi Aoi was celebrated as per tradition, every child born under a heavy storm will be celebrated because a bright future awaits - even though bright days are extremely rare to come by in their hometown [color=red][b]give yogensha enough money and she'll ease up on the rain tiger at will technique[/b][/color]. Her parents, Chouko and Nao, had been together for four years and she was their first child. Her childhood was quite uneventful, her parents managing to take good care of their newborn and were able to see their child become healthy - however, the Igarashi is known for rigorously training their shinobi since very young [color=red][b]i'd hate to see this be a recurring theme since this is the 2nd character but i suppose it matches both clans so far[/b][/color] and Aoi was no exception. She first stepped into their training grounds at the age of five - her parents weren't very comfortable with it, especially because Chouko was not an Igarashi nor a shinobi and thus she found their rigorous methods difficult to watch, but her father affirmed her that their children had a grand future. She was, after all, born during a heavy storm. [color=red][b]ITS FATE[/b][/color] Years have passed and Aoi had shown great premise. She was disciplined, well mannered, educated and even quiet - the last trait was somewhat uncommon in the Igarashi bloodline as they were known to be stern, selfish and 'loud as storm' caring only about themselves and their peers, but the head of the clan claimed that after every storm, a bright sun might show itself - referring that even in the midst of a clan known for their stern manners, a gentle or quiet soul may appear. Their fighting techniques and hiden clan techniques were taught very early to the young Aoi and she seemed to grasp them with ease. Their Arashiken (Storm Fist) was a technique that seemed to be brutal and merciless, but to use it effectively one needed to be fluid and gracious [color=red][b]so basically it's the gentle fist style to Kumogakure's otherwise ridiculously not-fluid and not-gracious raiton? i like[/b][/color]. Often, the clan's technique was called [i]Arashi no ryลซtai idล[/i] [b]ๅตใฎๆตไฝ“็งปๅ‹•[/b] or "Elegant dance of the Storm" because their users literally appear to dance as they delivered powerful blows with their fists. [color=red][b]mow we're crossing into gay territory[/b][/color] Aoi always seemed to enjoy the training as stern and rigorous as it was. It helped her graduate as one of the top members of her class, becoming a genin at the age of 13. She's anxious to go out on missions and aid the village in any way she can - after all, the clan's loyalty was also taught to her and the young kunoichi followed it like religion. [color=red][b]good. expect a visit from the Atarashi no Shugo-sha[/b][/color] [/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Personality:[/color][/b] [indent][color=green]โœ“[/color] [b]Loyalty.[/b][indent][i]The Igarashi are known to be extremely loyal and this loyalty is apparently passed by the clan to their members.[/i][/indent][color=red]โœ—[/color] [b]Insensitive.[/b][indent][i]The Igarashi's rigorous training leaves no room for sympathetic feelings towards the weak or the meek, Aoi does not concern herself with others well being. [color=red][b]ouch, reading this gave me a papercut from the edginess [b]owo[/b][/b][/color][/i][/indent][color=green]โœ“[/color] [b]Disciplined.[/b][indent][i]A rigorous training led her to become very disciplined and obedient. [color=red][b]basically she's the sensei's pet[/b][/color][/i][/indent][color=red]โœ—[/color] [b]Impatient.[/b][indent][i]Similarly to the reason above, a rigorous training - which she has enjoyed throughly her early life - led her to become very eager and interested in her own development. If she feels that someone or something is staggering her growth, she will not hesitate to voice it.[/i][/indent][color=green]โœ“[/color] [b]Independent.[/b][indent][i]Aoi will hardly if ever rely on someone else to get through any hardship, she will not deny help, but she will always try to solve things on her own. This was something that she taught herself during her trainings, she noticed that the only way to become better is pushing your own limits without relying on others. [color=red][b]friendship killed the ten tails though idk what you're talking about[/b][/color][/i][/indent][color=red]โœ—[/color] [b]Self-centered.[/b][indent][i]Of course, one of the traits her clan is known for. Between the success of a mission or the death of a squad member, the choice would be the former - unfortunately. [color=red][b]fortunately[/b][/color][/i][/indent][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Dreams and hopes:[/color][/b][indent][color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] A world where every shinobi is treated with equal respect and valor. [color=red][b]keep dreaming[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] The success of the Igarashi clan, as in, the clan being recognized as a powerful clan and key reason to the success of Amegakure. [color=red][b]:thinking: every clan so far is equally shit (in terms of stature and wealth/importance) so this ambition has a lot of room to grow[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] To see Amegakure thriving, in good condition and very good income, a village where there is no longer poverty and misery at every corner. [color=red][b].... best way to do that is to invade Kusagakure hehehe[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] A chance to prove her own might and valor to all of Amegakure.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Desires:[/color][/b][indent][color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Achieve something grand that will be remembered through the ages, akin to the famous sannin of the past. [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Direct recognization from shinobi she knows of and respects a lot. [color=red][b]which are?[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] To become the head of her clan. [color=red][b]not really an ambition or desire -- i mean, yeah it can be a desire but typically that'd require her to kill the people who are ahead of her in terms of heir-ship. so unless her parents are th clan leaders (which I mightve missed) and she is the only child and the heir to the clan is determined by kinship first and gender/sex second, this seems unlikely. not that that means it can't be a desire (i can desire to be a millionaire, even if it's basically impossible) but you're aware of the complexity of clan politics right?[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Her own success as a shinobi, so that her parents and her clan will be proud of her.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Fears:[/color][/b][indent][color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Death is a naturally aggravating fear, since it would end all chances of achieving her dreams and desires. [color=red][b]yeah this is a given for most people except those that are self-sacrificial to the point of stupidity[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Her clan being forgotten by history. [color=red][b]being a clan living in Amegakure makes this 99% likely to happen anyway. Konoha nin don't even know shit about Kumogakure's clans, so why would they care about some rain-drinker clan[/b][/color] [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Failure in becoming a known shinobi or failing in making her clan proud. [color=gray]๏ฝ˜[/color] Failing a mission in a way that is beyond repair.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Motivations:[/color][/b][indent]Aoi's motivations are extremely clear: She wants to become something strong [color=red][b]k naruto[/b][/color], recognized by her clan and perhaps even respected shinobi such as the leader of Amegakure [color=red][b]Ackshyually Yogensha is the most respect and the best nin ever to be made, ackshyually.[/b][/color]. She wants to become strong so that she may directly interfere with Amegakure's fate, as she firmly believes that her home village should not be ignored by the bigger nations [color=red][b]now we're talking[/b][/color] as it falls into poverty and misery [color=red][b]mostly the misery is the cause of economical loss -- war creates loss and loss creates economical failure. but yeah i get the point[/b][/color] - it is her main motivator to take up the task of proving the world as a whole that Amegakure can be as succesful as any other nation, if not even more, simply because their will is as consistent as the ever falling rain and as poweful as the booming storm that looms over them.[/indent] [center][color=black] โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€” [h3][b]Military[/b][/h3] โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”[/color][/center] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]S-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]A-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]B-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_False_Darkness]Lightning Release: False Darkness[/url] [color=red][b]specify -- a genin knowing B-rank jutsu. unlikely. a genin knowing this jutsu at the level of Kakuzu? impossible. knowing the jutsu is one thing but performing it at the level we hvae been shown before is not gonna happen -- you can have the jutsu but you need to specify just what it can do. can it still pierce rock? how strong is it?[/b][/color] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Thunderbolt]Lightning Release: Thunderbolt[/url] [color=red][b]same here -- having the jutsu is one thing, being able to use it at the level of (whats his face the future raikage cool guy that shoots lasers) is another. specify how strong it is -- it's a B rank in the anime (maybe even A) but a genin is gonna use it at a D or C-rank level because they just dont have the chakra, the control, or the knowledge and capacity to handle such a jutsu[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]C-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]D-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Body_Flicker_Technique]Body Flicker Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Manipulated_Shuriken_Technique]Manipulated Shuriken Technique[/url] [color=red][b]nice[/b][/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Temporary_Paralysis_Technique]Temporary Paralysis Technique[/url] [color=red][b]accepted only because it's a D-rank jutsu, but you're aware that the intensity, duration and amount of people it can be cast on is directly linked to your skill level and thus expecting this to be anything more than 'i can stunlock you for 10 seconds' at a genin level is gonna be a nono?[/b][/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Shuriken_Technique]Shadow Shuriken Technique[/url][/indent] [color=red][b]dope[/b][/color] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]E-rank Techniques[/color][/b][indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Body_Replacement_Technique]Body Replacement Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Clone_Technique]Clone Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rope_Escape_Technique]Rope Escape Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Transformation_Technique]Transformation Technique[/url] [color=red][b]no real need to list basic techniques like this[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b][color=black]Custom Jutsu:[/color][/b][indent][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [b][color=yellow]ๅตๆ‹ณ[/color] Storm Fist - Arashiken[/b] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Rank:[/b][indent]Varies greatly between users. [color=red][b][s]ok but this is Aoi's sheet, not every user's sheet, so what level does she use it at.[/s] this makes more sense when you realize it's a fighting style. leave it like this then since that's fine[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Range:[/b][indent]Short / Self, fighting style. [color=red][b]nintaijutsu[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Description:[/b][indent]This style of fighting is inherently present in members of the Igarashi clan. The name is because this fighting revolves around utilizing lightning to amplify the damage of their taijutsu strikes - but not only that, their movements are fluid and elegant, with the graceful of rain yet with the impact of a storm. They are precise and lethal and leave no room for mercy, when an Igarashi strikes, electricity generated from their chakra at the tip of their fingers or knuckles passes ot their foes' body, causing an effect of numbness which leads them to believe that the strike was either weak or caused no harm simply because the pain was nullified. Dangers lies in their strikes when the electricity causes muscular spasms and contractions or more dangerously when it causes neurological damage and loss of conciousness. [color=red][b]hmmmm.... so it's like having a finger with no feeling in it -- holding your finger in the fire won't hurt you but it'll still burn, making it dangerous because you won't realize when you're literally being burned up.. i like it[/b][/color] The Arashiken has many other techniques derived from it and they all excel in offensive, with the occasional defensive technique. They are masters of nintaijutsu and the strength of their style lies in how it is used by those who utilize it - Aoi is adequate at most, as her training is far from done. [/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent]This is a fighting style and not a technique on it's own. [color=red][b]... yes but there are still weaknesses -- how can i surpass the fighting style? what are areas it falls short on? its super fluid but how does it deal with another super fluid fighting style? how would it hold up vs. say the gentle fist style?[/b][/color][/indent] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [b]ๅตๆ‹ณ็ ดๅฃŠ Storm Fist - Destroy - Arashiken Hakai [/b] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Rank:[/b][indent]C.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Range:[/b][indent]Short.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Description:[/b][indent]Lightning chakra flows through the user's arms and onto their fists - their fingers and knuckles are the chosen recipient where the chakra gathers and then remains there, their strikes are imbued with electricity. This is the core of the Arashiken, where their entire fighting style and moveset starts. There is more information above.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent]Range is an obvious weakness, otherwise, figure it [color=red][b]figure it out isn't a good weakness. you're fighting NPC's 99.99% of the time so you can tell me as a GM what the weaknesses are -- i guess i'll just break your character's arms, that'll work right? otherwise this is fine[/b][/color].[/indent] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [b][color=yellow]ๆ”พ้›ป[/color] Discharge - Hลden[/b] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Rank:[/b][indent]C.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Range:[/b][indent]Medium.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Description:[/b][indent]This technique requires concentration and focus from the user. Their lightning chakra spreads through their body and is condensed on the shoulders, hips and back - upon the user's request, they will expel this chakra violently in a circular area attack around themselves. Anything caught within the range will be electrocuted and suffer moderate damage. The chakra usage for this technique is extremely high, meaning that it is mostly used as a last resource, or a way to attack a large number of foes at once. [color=red][b]that means that you can't spam it[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent]Don't get hit by the area attack [color=red][b]''dont get hit'' is a weakness to literally everything. did you even try my br friend?[/b][/color]. Certain barriers may withstand it. [color=red][b]this is better. doton barriers will get broken but might soften the blow for example.[/b][/color][/indent] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [b][color=yellow]ๅตไฟ่ญท[/color] Storm Shield - Arashi Hogo[/b] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Rank:[/b][indent]C.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Range:[/b][indent]Self - All sides.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Description:[/b][indent]A technique used to deflect many throwable weapons at once. Through electricty, the user kneads lightning chakra and uses it to create a magnetic field that deflects metal weaponry with extreme effectiveness in all sides around them. This technique can be used to disarm an armed foe as well, by using it within their range. Once the technique is cast, an electric barrier raises around the user, weapons caught will float around them and once they end it, they will fall to the ground. [color=red][b]... but non metallic weapons are not stopped -- which means if i smack you with an umbrella, you're still gonna get hurt[/b][/color][/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent]Limited use and effectiveness.[/indent] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a3/Nature_Icon_Lightning.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091021173339[/img] [b][color=yellow]ๅตๆ‹ณ่’ๅปƒ[/color] Storm Fist Devastate - Arashiken Kลhai[/b] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Rank:[/b][indent]C.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Range:[/b][indent]Short.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Description:[/b][indent]The user will knead their chakra and spread it through their legs, using it to stimulate their own nervous system, briefly increasing the speed of their neural synapses to boost their own speed - they will then charge at their enemy at blinking speed, flanking their sides or, if not able to, attacking directly with a series of punches and back-hand blows. This technique, while seemingly just a direct way to approach a foe, seems to make the user capable of responding extremely well to their newfound speed and even to threats with ease [color=red][b].. time slows? no to that, the rest is fine[/b][/color] - but it only lasts for a few seconds before the electricty wears off.[/indent] [color=gray]โ–ธ[/color] [b]Weaknesses:[/b][indent]Limited use and effectiveness. It also strains the user if they choose to overuse.[color=red][b]just describe it as the speed of the lightning armor and we'd be fine.[/b][/color][/indent] [/indent][/indent][/hider] [color=red][b]ok look through, make edits, and post it in the character bin[/b][/color] [/quote]