[@TheWindel] 

Okay, let's address these points 1 by 1.

1. Age of 16 added.

2. I cannot find any issues with the code for my third picture- if someone could look at the raw code and tell me what I am doing wrong, that would be great.

3. Sickness blasts are a more targeted and stronger version of her aura. Victims start feeling ill and lethargic with weaker attacks, but if she puts more into it, like in the sample, she can cause targets to collapse in exhaustion and even fall unconscious.

4. Will wait for KoL's opinion

5. I thought the sample post was just to give you an idea of writing quality.