I vote for Nomen by @Vocab. The reason that I vote for it is because I find myself to be able to relate with the character in the story. And although I have to admit that Sleeping Silence's grammar check was correct, I feel that doing so would completely destroy the feel of the story. After all, I imagined the story to be written by Deathclaw in a Fallout background trying to be sentient. Because of that, having perfect grammar while writing in the first person view point would make no sense and completely alter the story. Sometimes having something hit and miss would be more anticipating for a character to have than having the errors to be consistent. But what do I know?