[@j8cob] I'm not gonna do a full blown review right now but I'll just let you know ahead of time that when I do a full review I'm going to say that the storm release jutsu you made custom have too strong strengths and too weak weaknesses. Either that - or the jutsu are not clear in how much damage they do. Finger gun for example I get the feeling that it shoots all the way through you, but that's a) pretty damn fucking strong for a genin and b) dumb when you consider that the only way to dodge is with 'pre-emptive movement'.