Okay, so, I ended up starting on writing up a detailed info bit about the Lion's Ridge Community, and linking it with the "hunter's society" thing we talked about. It's not done, but I put what I have so far in that reserved post. Wanted to get what I had up since it would be something Lydia would be in the know of, and make sure you're okay with the whole, "only the best hunters or hunters who know someone can get in" thing. Let me know what you think? I kinda got carried away, so I apologize. It's all mostly just ideas and totally open to change if you have any ideas or don't like any of it! I added the colored insignias because I thought it would be a fun little touch for them to be spattered around the community, like displayed on houses or mailboxes and whatnot to denote what rank lives where, if they have any kind of standing in the LRS.

For a fair warning, I haven't read back through it yet to make sure that it all makes perfect sense, so if you have questions, let me know, and expect typos as of yet. Heh.

Oh, and I could use some advice on the header. I was indecisive and put together multiple text colors to the insignia (put "crest," but "insignia" is more accurate, I think, so will switch that later). Putting them in a hider below, including the one I used. Let me know which one you like best, or if you'd rather any colors changed!

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Hey, about the reason for the section breaks, some forms of writing require a definitive, "Next Scene" statement! Like screenwriting. Each scene has to be marked. If they go from one room to another, you mark it as a new scene. Was yet another reason I'm never writing another screenplay. Anyway, just not usually as useful for the same purpose in typical prose writing. xD

Well, "then" shows order. I don't think I've noticed you over-using "then." I'll keep an eye open, too, if you'd like, all the same. And because now I'm curious.