Then please alert me when you post a rewrite or a new character if you're not satisfied.  

Now for this submission here are some things to resolve before it would be accepted:

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[*]Regarding that backstory, given that there are Chups with horns running around it's not a big issue for a horned human to be running around. At worst he'll be confused for one even if he isn't one.
[*]"Commune with the wild" would go into skills, rather than be an entry in "moves"
[*]Please elaborate the nature of your summon(s) 
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