[@Zverda]:

[hider=It's a redo'd review!]
[b][u]Overview[/u][/b]: Alright! I'm not going to have a crazy amount to say obviously, as we worked on this a lot already. I'll still try and cover as many bases as I can, however.
[u]General[/u]: There's an incomplete sentence in the "Appearance" section with "[i]Prefering[/i] to wear...", sounds like it can be tied into the previous sentence. Other than that, everything looks great here!
[u]Personal[/u]: In "internal conflict" it reads "it is not [i]far[/i] to those who have been left..." but everything else is good!
[u]Vocational[/u]: I'd honestly like to do a side-by-side comparison of the capital "V" and "B" in this font. Same with the funky "P" in personal. :lol Also, to not over-crowd this thing with typo/sentence fixes, everything else I find in that regard is going to be DM'd to you in Discord. Otherwise I have no qualms, but can you please change the "shit-ton of make-up"? I just really don't want there to be expletives used outside of the bio and IC. Thank you!
[u]Supplemental[/u]: If Geoff is "built in the like{ness} of a human", does that mean his actions are fairly fluid, or more clunky/clockworky, like that of a machine? This can just be answered in a DM or something, as like I said before, I don't need a book detailing robo-anatomy and A.I. Everything else here is good! Discrepancies for bio in the next hider.
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As stated above, typos and such will be sent to you via Discord. So, this section should (comparatively) be rather small.

- In the paragraph discussing how she "did not go unnoticed", you do still refer to "them", "throwing them off her trail" and drawing "them" to her. I guess I'm reading it as if there's some mass of entities watching her from every corner, which is perplexing when it is discovered that it was only Riker -- unless there were others that noticed her, in which case how very good is her disguise? Also, you state how her ability that she happened to use "[u]that night[/u]... drew them to her". What night? Maybe you meant "at night"?
- Maybe make Riker's "stalking" timeframe a bit more definitive than "six or so months"; i.e. consider cutting out the "or so"

***- Only major grievance that could really use some clarification: how is it that she keeps her activities hidden from her husband? Does she sneak out while he's asleep, and get back before he wakes up? Does she only leave a few times a week? How does she know that he hasn't, in some capacity, caught on to her actions? How much time does she really have away from both jobs -- enough for her to be able to rest in any adequate way? How did she hide this secret while her children were still babies, when they would most definitely stir at nighttime? Elaborating on how she keeps her secret from her husband would be the only thing I'd need before she is 100% good to go.***
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You're so friggin' close!! Really, if you could cover just that last tidbit, it'll be ready! Honest!!
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Also, this is a great opportunity to use this as a thread bump. *Bump*!