[@Lyla]

Hi Lyla.

I'm sorry my Cs wasn't up to par. I'm still inexperienced and learning. 

Gonna start revising my Cs and get back to you. 

What I got from your review is that I need more practical adventure skills and less utility. 

Will make the necessary changes and re submit for one of the last 3 spots.

Thanks for a second chance.

Cheers!!