[@Lucky Knight]: [hider] Hey! So, this is frickin' stellar. I honestly have very little to talk about, here. With Supplemental, I was wondering when she would've gotten the time to learn several instruments when she was so adament about skipping her classes? Other than that, I don't have any qualms for the majority of the other sections. The few discrepancies I have for the bio are as followed: - You made a misnomer of "stones", stating "coin", but this really isn't too big of an issue. Just be sure to note the distinction of currency for this setting. - I was wondering, her entire youth was spent, then, in Berevin? This is fine, just note that the Eildi Society weren't even established until a half-century ago, and wouldn't have gained much prominence outside of Glimhollow until the most recent decades. The actual Society itself is solely based in Glimhollow, though this doesn't mean that news of their establishment wouldn't have traveled to Berevin, or the rest of Peylor, so I'm really just stating this for your own consideration. Honestly, this is friggin' golden! I love Kieriel's character, and I apologize it took me so long to reply to this. Been busy irl quite a bit, but I'll be a lot more prevalent coming up, here. If you feel you need to make any adjustments, do let me know, otherwise I'll say welcome aboard! [/hider]