[@Matador] Your character is accepted. You may place him in the char-tab. [@Dead Cruiser] As long as her heritage is Demonic in nature I suppose its doable. If say she had something akin to Yusuke's deal, how 44 generations back his paternal ancestor was a Demon than its certainly possible. Dragons aren't mentioned to exist but I'm sure there were Demons that greatly resembled them. [@Altered Tundra] Take your time. [@Argonaut][@HeroicSociopath] Good to see you guys putting in work. Let me know when you're ready to be reviewed in full. [quote=@Raging Fenrir] Here's what I've got: [hider=Ayame] [center] [img] http://awtlblog.vitsco.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/Sawatari_Makoto.jpg [/img] [i]I’m only pickin’ on ya cause you’re fun![/i][/center] [b]Name:[/b] Ayame Masahiro [b]Alias:[/b] Aya-Meiwakuna (The latter part meaning “annoying” or “troublesome”) [b]Title:[/b] Trickster Fox [b]Meaning:[/b] Masahiro means “perfection.” [b]Species:[/b] half-demon (kitsune) [b]Gender:[/b] female [b]Sexuality:[/b] Bisexual [b]Real Age:[/b] 16 [b]Age Appearance:[/b] 16 [b]History:[/b] Ayame was born to a human mother, and never knew her father. Whenever she asked, her mother would just tell her that he was in a faraway place. As she grew older, she assumed that this meant her father was dead, and Miss Masahiro let her believe it. However, the truth is that even her mother doesn’t know what became of that charming fox that won her heart all those years ago. Ayame was raised as a human and her mother never spoke of her demonic lineage. She had no tail or ears to give away her origin, and it seemed she would be able to live an ordinary human life. However, it didn’t take long for her to start seeing things that nobody else could. Even as a little girl, she’d talk to ghosts or see little imps scurrying by. Her mother was quick to tell her to keep such things to herself, but that was only a temporary solution. Soon, her vulpine nature began to surface. She would prank her fellow students constantly, skip school, and even got away with shoplifting on a couple of occasions. [color=red]So she isn't naturally mischievous, I mean she is, but it spawns from her demon heritage. Would having it sealed or suppressed change her? (just for my knowledge)[/color] Everything reached a boiling point one day, though, when she fell in with a bad crowd. While cutting Middle School, she met up with some delinquents from a nearby High School. It started out with typical shenanigans: vandalism, smoking, looking menacing on the street… But then when school let out and they pulled a poor guy into an alley, Ayame was having second thoughts. They tried to rob him, but he didn’t have any money, so they proceeded to beat the living hell out of him. Ayame watched at first, wanting to fit in, but the pit in her stomach just grew deeper and deeper. This wasn’t fun. Her pranks had never really hurt anyone before, and this was too much, so she told them to stop. That was a mistake, and the delinquents quickly turned their attention to Ayame. They surrounded her before she could run, and she felt their hands crawl along her shoulders, then grip her tightly. She didn’t know what they were planning on doing, but she became overcome with terror. The rest was a blur. She remembered blue flames, and when she came to most of them were running away with a couple on the ground badly burned. Her demonic ancestry was no longer a secret. [b]Personality |[/b] [list][*] Kind [*] Outgoing [*] Clever [*] Mischievous [*] Irresponsible [*] Nosy [*] Inquisitive [/list] [b]Power and Techniques |[/b] [list][*] Foxfire – A kind of demonic aura unique to kitsune. This blue flame can be manipulated to produce various effects. [*] Purifying Flame – Ayame uses foxfire in its raw form to burn her enemies. However, unlike a normal flame, Ayame can determine who it burns and who it doesn’t, thus it “purifies” what she sees as an enemy. [color=red]How far do they reach? how powerful are these flames? remember you're D-Class. Also I'm assuming these flames simply race out from around her? to hone fireballs would require it to be a technique in its own right (I'll be allowing more techniques to be learned as we progress).[/color] [*] Illusory Flame – Ayame can use her foxfire to create tangible illusions. This allows her to create small objects, or coat herself or another in the flame to create a disguise. The illusions require constant concentration, must be within eyesight of Ayame, and are not particularly durable; biting an illusory coin would surly cause it to disappear into a puff of blue flame. [color=red]Can these illusionary flames burn people? and is it all physical contact that causes them to break apart? One more thing, are there any hints to them being illusions, like a rise in temperature or smoke?[/color] [*] Internal Flame – By breathing in her foxfire, Ayame can awaken her kitsune blood. She grows her tail and ears, and a set of claws. Her senses become heightened, she becomes faster and more agile, and she gets a small boost to her strength. However, as she is only half-demon, the form cannot be maintained indefinitely. Likewise, when she reverts to her human form, she feels all the strain she subjected her body to. [color=red]Give me physical feats for your physical boosts. Can she uproot gnarled roots? have speed comparable to a fox? and most importantly how long does the transformation last. Give post lengths. Can she use her flames in this form as well?[/color] [/list] [b]Spirit Class:[/b] D [b]Weapon(s):[/b] None [b]Theme:[/b] [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D566niVB0lQ&list=PL1AC584471FD4F040&index=148[/youtube][/hider] [/quote] [color=red]I have no real issues with your CS. Fix those little things and let me know when you're ready to be checked again.[/color]