[quote=@Jbcool]
[@Banzai Tracers] A few things...

We write in 3rd-person, that's just something I ask over every RP I run, just makes things easier and keeps the narrative style flowing; you can still write internal thoughts etc, just without 'I' constantly coming up.
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I know, but i was listening to allot of calming music while channeling my creativity and it just sort of 'felt right'. I didnt want the character sheet to seem too much like a personal dossier like the CIA might have on someone, it needed to be more 'personal', so a corner stone of that is it contains allot of his beliefs in it, rather than stright up facts. Dont worry i'll get back to writing like a normal human being when the RP starts. I do wish i'd had more ideas as to his background... it seems to have come out as more a list of his emotions than a historical record...

[quote=@Jbcool]
The only sections of a Character Sheet I need filled are those presented in the original post.
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Yeah but i think this adds flavour. For instance now you know that the legendary characters in the chapter he most admires are the Brother-Dreadnaughts.

[quote=@Jbcool]
Why does he have a laspistol?
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Dunno, lol. If i gave him a full bolt pistol then, as he already has a full scout-sword that would just make him a pistol-sword guy instead of a bolter guy. Maybe i should change it...

[quote=@Jbcool]
I do like the bronze knife idea, that's pretty cool. 
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Thanks, that was a happy accident.