[quote=@CaptainSully] [center][img]https://image.ibb.co/nwzBEo/header.png[/img] [h3][sup][sup][color=crimson][i]"[color=white][i]You say I am a brute...a bloodthirsty monster. Well let me tell you, you're nothing but another skull for the Skull Throne![/i][/color]"[/i][/color][/sup][/sup][/h3][color=cccccc] [color=crimson][b]Age[/b][/color] 1059 [color=crimson][b]Gender[/b][/color] Male [color=crimson][b]Alias[/b][/color] The Flesh Tearer [color=crimson][b]Homeworld[/b][/color] Bodt [color=crimson][b]Alignment[/b][/color] Chaos [color=crimson][b]Deity[/b][/color] Khorne [color=crimson][b]Rank[/b][/color] Chosen Champion of Khorne [color=crimson][b]Species[/b][/color] Chaos Space Marine [color=crimson][[/color][color=white]Khorne Berserker[/color][color=crimson]][/color] [color=crimson][b]Languages[/b][/color] Low Gothic [color=crimson][b]Roles[/b][/color] DPS/Tank [color=crimson][b]Powers[/b][/color] Psychic powers are for the weak and the scared, real warriors look their foe in the eye as they sever their head. [color=crimson][b]Abilities[/b][/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Combat Master[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] There are few who are more capable in combat than those who give themselves fully to the Blood God. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Crushing Blow[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Added ferocity with each swing of an axe makes quick work of enemies. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Hatred[/b][/color] [color=crimson][[/color][color=fff200]Loyalists[/color] / [color=ec008c]Slaanesh[/color] / [color=0072bc]Tzeentch[/color][color=crimson]][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Whether they be followers of the false Emperor or the pathetic gods of Excess and Change, they all incur the hatred of Krull. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Whirlwind of Death[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Fighting one opponent at a time is for the weak. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Mark of Khorne[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] You are not truly a servant of Khorne until you bear his mark. [color=crimson][b]Chaos Mutations[/b][/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Skinhidden Plate[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] See Wargear. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Horns and Spikes[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Monstrous demonic horns have sprouted from his head and spikes have grown from his skinhidden plate. [color=crimson][b]Specific Weaknesses[/b][/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Can lose himself during combat until the final enemy falls. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Will not tolerate anything even remotely sinister from servants of the other gods. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Could quite easily turn on the entire squad. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] No real ranged weaponry or vertical movement beyond climbing. [color=crimson][b]Appearance[/b][/color] [img]https://image.ibb.co/i5HbfT/fullbody.png[/img] [color=crimson][b]Wargear[/b][/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Great Axe of Khorne[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] A two handed axe from Khorne himself. An iconic weapon capable of felling the toughest of opponents. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Collar of Khorne[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Psychic powers and attacks on the mind are the works of the weak, the Collar protects Krull from their effects. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Combi-Melta[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Khorne wants the shedding of blood, whether it be up close or from distance. Skulls are skulls when it comes to the skull throne. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Power Armour[/b][/color] [color=crimson][[/color][color=white]Skinhidden Plate[/color][color=crimson]][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] Years in the warp have caused his armour and skin to fuse into an effective and even more durable armour. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Infernal Star[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] An iron halo corrupted by the Blood God himself gives Krull the protection he needs to get up close. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] [color=white][b]Talisman of Burning Blood[/b][/color] [color=crimson]|[/color] There can never be enough rage in combat, this ensures that there is enough for all who are near. [color=crimson][b]Personality[/b][/color] The myth that all Berserkers are frothing madmen is for the most part true, however there are a few who have mastered the art of rage in battle so that it becomes an extension of their martial prowess. The most famous of these is Kharn the Betrayer, capable of utilising his rage to fell enemies as small as cultists up to the towering war machines of the Titan Legions. Krull is another such warrior. While he hasn't come closer to felling a Titan solo, he has the capability to control and channel his rage efficiently during battle. Outside of battle he is indistinguishable from most other power armoured individuals, capable of strategic planning and reasoned discussion. However, his battlefield persona is one of pure bloodlust to rival Khornes own thirst for the crimson life force. He will slay all who stand in his way and treats all who stand in his way as foe. Headstrong, fearless and all round monstrous, there is no reasoning with him in battle. His current want it so take the skulls of the strongest fighters for his God, even if that means aligning himself with the servants of the others Chaos Gods to do so. That isn't to say that if they prove themselves as capable, he won't challenge them. [color=crimson][b]History[/b][/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Took part in the Great Crusade. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Was at Istvaan III fighting alongside Kharn. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Critically wounded at the Siege of Terra but was evacuated safely. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Fought demons for a century in the Eye of Terror. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Emerged from the Eye with a warband of berserkers terrorising Imperial space. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] His warband was swayed by the whispers of Slaanesh where Krull was not. He slaughtered his warband one by one before killing the demon of Slaanesh that had turned his brothers. [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Most recently travelling the galaxy to find the strongest fighters to test his skills against. [color=crimson][b]Likes and Dislikes[/b][/color] [color=crimson]Likes[/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Combat [color=crimson]Dislikes[/color] [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Stealth [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Tzeentch [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Slaanesh [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] The Emperor [color=goldenrod]☼[/color] Loyalists [color=crimson][b]Theme[/b] [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zmidSFJFH00[/youtube][/color][/color][/center] [/quote] Wow, that looks like a very detailed character there. There are a few things I'm concerned about however.I'm going to list them so hopefully we can work this out. 1.This is not a big issue, but I would like this CS moved to the Characters tab if you don't mind. It's fine for now but I would just like to keep that tab used for what it's meant to be used. 2.I'm fine with Khornates, but in this RP you're going to have to work with a party of Undivided, as well as other denominations of Chaos. I get how Khornates are, but I would like for your character to be at least able to kill the enemy and not their associates in this RP. 3.I do have a limit on Astartes due to what I have planned, I would also like to know how this berserker got onto the world and how they got into the undershive level of a hive city with a bunch of cultists and renegades. 4.There will be several factions in this story, I would like a valid reason why he would be here and not around a more combative sector of the galaxy. I would say I'm rather impressed on how much detail your character has, perhaps later on I will host an actual Chaos Astartes roleplay, but this one is sort of to be a mixture due to the plot I have. I'm not going to decline, but I would like some of the issues I've posted addressed.