My Archibald Review

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-Skills are missing, need skills

And a few out of place lines in history. Which I have demonstrated.

[quote]The pair had managed to conceal their partnership for the better half of a year, but when the baby started to grow in Viola's belly.[/quote]

This comes off silly. Nobody would write this beside a small child. This could be better written as I gave given the example of "They kept their relationship concealed for half year, till Viola fell with child." Sounds much nicer and cleaner than belly.

[quote]It was either they dragged their child around the land with them as they ran from Vampires and humans alike, or leave him on the doorstep of Granny Gertrude.[/quote]

You don't explain how they know Gertrude or why this would be an option they would choose. You don't need to have a crazy Arisen history, however, you do needs detail. Which are lacking here.

However! I love everything about Archy and he seems like a great character. Besides those two little gripes of mine which can easily be fixed.