[@Jaredthefox92]

Okay, don't expect me to try and soften any criticisms I have for Lillian.

1.) You moved her over to the Character tab before I could accept her. You should know to submit her here so I can review her.

2.) There has to be a reason why the ringleader would spare her, but keep her dad locked up in a cursed spellbook.

3.) Connections, Just connections. Not personality. Hell, you could've waited till more characters are accepted to work on it, and i'd be fine with it.

4.) There's no separate section in her CS that says what her powers are. Just the compulsion. That leads to my fifth and main concern.

5.) The audition section of the CS is supposed to be like a sample post, yet you used it to explain her abilites. Ignoring it's original purpose entirely.

 The rules say that, [u]the only thing not up for debate is the Audition. If you do not follow the Audition instructions, [i]I will have to reject your CS immediately.[/i][/u]

 So tl:dr, I can't accept Lillian.