I actually just looked back, gave it some thought, and...

[@Zetsuko] There is one more edit I will ask.

[hider][quote]Keen Eyed - Riley is blessed with excellent eyesight.
Attention to Detail - Again, Riley has keen eyes, and very little escapes them.[/quote]

Okay, so Attention to Detail isn't supposed to be about eyesight. It's supposed to be a mental thing, noticing things that escape others due to thoroughness. But now that I've reread everyone's sheets again, I notice that basically what you want is two traits that do the same thing. Keen eyesight.

[i]Don't take two traits that do the same thing.[/i] It's the same reason I asked Eire's sheet be changed. Use your traits to define your character, to branch out what they are beyond what their skills are. Change one of them, I say. Keen-Eyed would count as your Youth bonus trait as it's physical. So, I suggest taking something besides Attention-to-Detail.

And again, you can make your own traits. I may ask for a change in wording on them, but I will accept custom traits and proficiencies and what-have-you.[/hider]