[@LemonZest1337] So far, for me, I've seen nothing that was actually wrong with the sheet or anything that threw me off the beat while reading through it. You've already addressed the others' problems so I think the character's golden now. Don't know about the others though, but it's good for me. I love him, no doubt about that. I also love the fact that he isn't a combat-oriented kid, fit for his age, and it really adds to the dynamic of the characters. This allows for a lot of interaction and I imagine a lot of added drama which I am looking forward to. He's also such an innocent child and I look forward to his development throughout the RP!