[quote=@Shoryu] Grief almost sounds like a villain xD Also, there's not a lot of details on the actual capabilities and limitations of things, like how big, whether or not he can control a 'range' or only 'tiny or huge', or details on the other bits. I don't need like, strick precision details, and I can enjoy some things being revealed IC, but too much vagueness leaves too much to the wonder of how far it could actually stretch when finally 'used'... you also left out his actual height XD also, I mentioned using Hiders so images don't clutter things up XD Anyway, off to bed! I'll try to drop my own CS tommorrow somewhere amidst the work that's waiting for me. [/quote] Well yes, normally Grief is a villain in my main series. However I try to make my main story really morally grey so in it you have villains fighting other villains, with themes of warfare like in WW1 and WW2. I would call Grief a villain protagonist. I see, well I can fix that. The thing is I never really used him as a pony before, but he has those extra details in his Mobian form. I'll try to fix that soon. As for height, I need to look that up for MLP characters. I see well um, I don't really know how to use a header yet. ^^' Alright, I'll try to fix this.