[@AngelofOctober]

Overall, I don't see any real negatives to point out as everything is detailed and in the spots it needs to be. I really love how much thought was put in to let the other players know what symbols and hand gestures which as spelling will go in the RP. It is nice to also have a family tree with faces we can see and know which ones have perished. I really enjoyed that the description of appearance wasn't just a straight up repeat of the picture and that we got a preview of personality before even getting to the chapters. The notes were a really neat idea and I hope those continue! The story and watching the fall of his home really gave me emotions and I feel more strongly for Idris. I love this character you have built and I look forward to seeing how his friendship with Astraea goes in the future.