[@Akayaofthemoon] Astraea Fos' Profile Review: [b]The Description[/b]: There was like one small error in the description. It made me go WTF, and like what? [quote]The smell of lavender and vanilla invading your scenes which caused you to think it was slightly unfitting for her in your opinion.[/quote] That made me slightly confused, since it should be senses. Unless there's something I am missing. But I enjoyed the entire Description minus that one hiccup in my brain, saying wtf. It felt like a story book unfolding while reading it. [b]Persona[/b]: I love your character's strengths, there's no real hiccup in my mindscape that made me go wtf. So that's always a plus. Your flaws have some hiccups though. [quote]She is a sensitive soul and does not actually care for much violent. She feels pain when others when they are sad or upset. This makes it sometimes hard to hunt or fight. Sh does not like seeing cruelty.[/quote] The first one made me think up of Violence and you misspelled She, at the end there. The rest of the flaws are good. Now onto the neutral part. I liked the entire section. The last part, the Skills! Very good read, it was amazing. [i]smiles[/i] [b]Battle Profile[/b]: The picture definitely shows off your focal crystal very well. And the description in the focal crystal section was pretty great too. Special Equipment section, I have to say I still like the Bag of Holding & Kindred Bracelets. Equipment Section; I like she is very helpful. To the group while traveling. Weapon section, "Whip it good!" XD Special Attack Section, I definitely like her special attack. It's pretty too. [b]Magic Profile[/b]: I like the picture of Astraea Fos' Spell book. And I do like her spell book's description it definitely matches the picture. Who has the lights? It's Astraea Fos! I hope that pun didn't go over your head. xD Lesser Spells, pretty spells, I do like all three. Medium Spell, I wonder what it looks like in combat, it probably pretty. :) Misc Battle Info, being underestimated is not good in anything. Nice Battle section overall. [b]Your Tale[/b]: Now onto the story book part two. Aww, poor Astraea... her mother was murdered by people who were afraid of her daughter. Guess they worshiped daemons... >.<; I hope all those bad people got their competence because they deserve it... I love the song, it fits. I like the misc section too. [i]smiles[/i] I have finished [@Akayaofthemoon]'s profile review. Now I have to read, [@AngelofOctober]'s Profile and review it. Which will be awesome.