[@Akayaofthemoon] For the most part I love Astraea I got a sense of her soul when we were writing our collab. The history was well thought of and well detailed and I love the lore you have setup. Your skills and spells are well thought out and I really don't have very many criticisms so I won't force critique that isn't needed. However, I do have 1 minor nitpick and it's two of neutral personalities feel like they belong in her strengths; [quote]She doesn’t like bullies and she definitely does not appreciate unnecessary cruelty. You do not have to be hateful. There are better ways of doing things. Astraea cannot stand when other people only think of themselves. It makes her feel frustrated that the one person's selfish actions affect everyone but they don’t care. It is all about them and she just can’t see why anyone would do this.[/quote] And they both seem kind of redundant. Find a way to condense these two sentences together into one thought and move them off to the strength or split them to flaws. Otherwise, I loved the sheet. Can't wait to see more of the character in the RP.