[quote=@Lord Wraith]
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I wrote a fade to black scene? Is that more accurate? 
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Next time you just gotta go all out. Like graphic detail. Like, ban-worthy graphic detail. Like, I want to be eating a well-made sandwich while I read it and I slowly lose my appetite as I progress through it. So now I'm no longer hungry and have to throw away my very well-made sandwich. So, yeah. Go big or go home.