[@AngelofOctober]'s Review for his profile

Idris Beorhtric's Review that is.

[b]Species[/b]:

The Species description for Idris is wonderful, I like his picture. I like the "I will hold strong" in the center.

[b]Description[/b]:

His description is wonderful. it shows much character about him. Something going to tell me I'm going to be crying because of the profile at some point. >.<;

[b]Persona[/b]:

I love the personality strengths of Idris. Very well made and didn't see any flaws in it.

Now it's onto the personality flaws of Idris. Aww, I feel sorry for him beating himself up for not able to protect the city. This means the personality flaws are done with flying colors.

Now, it's onto the hobbies and other things, ala Neutral. I like the simple nature, he is adventurous and likes to show people he's not a mutt deaf kid. That's quite cute and he is determined kid, I give him that.

The Skills are where you pay the bills, I am failing at trying to create puns here. Unless someone can create a pun for me.  xD

I enjoyed his five skills, they were great reads. And it feels like Rune Reading & Calligraphy compliment each other very nicely.

[b]Battle Profile[/b]:

I like the little things of *See appearance for Crystal or Staff. That's very useful information. I do like the description for his focal crystal.

I love the description of Brethil Vandl - Silver Birch Staff and its ability is awesome. It is a useful ability nonetheless.

His second special item is pretty, in terms of the picture you picked for his key. And I like its description & ability's description.

The Equipment is very neat and nice, in terms I like he brought a World Map with him. xD

[b]Magic Profile[/b]:

Now the School of Focus & The spell book are wonderful. That is pretty adorable, he hugging his father when he was given a beautiful spell book. I do love the picture of the spell book.

Now onto the lesser spells. Very descriptive and I liked the bonus effect on Slick.

Now onto the Medium spells.

Since, [@deadpixel] already helped you fixing my concern in this section. Yays, I definitely like Whirlwind as a runic spell anyway.

Bend is a pretty funny spell. I can see that happen to bandits. xD

Now its onto the misc battle info. Very well done again. I do like the fact its like goosebumps for him in a sense or a lightning storm where your hairs stand up.

[b]Tale[/b]:

I like the starting part of the Tale, in terms of the italicized part. Now it's onto the 8 chapters within this tale. 

Chapter 1, I love the first chapter, it's a father and mother's 4th child and I like their interactions with their kids. In terms of the family banter. It's always good to have family banter. xD

Chapter 3, I loved the realization of the mother when being told by Mindra saying, he can't hear. It all clicked, it's like she has an idea. I loved the family meeting where the Gruffud was eating with his hands and not a fork. That was hilarious. And Hákon saying bummer when hearing what his father had said.

Chapter 5, That was a cute scene between sister & baby brother ala, Blodeuwedd and Idris anyway. And I have to agree that Idris' grandparents are scary. xD

Chapter 11, Aww, celebrations. They are so cute. I like that he's going to get tons of presents for his birthday more or less. Cedric Briar is kinda of a dick. I did like Valentino punching Cedric in the face. He deserves it. xD

Chapter 13, the messages between the two boys were pretty fun to read, I liked the neigh one. Cedric is a horse, of course.

Chapter 14, Part 1 of Chapter 14 was very cute and I liked his mother's reaction to what her son wrote. Being called a chicken isn't a good thing to be called. xD

This section is about Chapter 14 part 2. 

I do like the song you picked for the later half of this part. The Attack on the Oaken Fort.

[quote]Though not in a way that would worry any of his mean.[/quote]

There's an extra letter in the last word, an a decided to appear and disrupt the ball of danger.

Another excellent song choice. I definitely like the blood, death and destruction going on in the Oaken Fort. Even though it is quite depressin' nonetheless. 

Oh my... this is depressing. Also great song choice again. I am enthralled by this part so far. Even though it is getting more and more desperate as time passes.

I am further in still of your second part and I must say, it is quite astonishing. And is putting me to tears just reading it. Because of what happened to Idris' sister at the end of that. Being gobbled up by a Dire Wolf is quite terrifying. But at least she killed one of the them.

I am on the Midnight part and I like the song as well, it keeps the action and pacing of this roleplay going. 

I just finished the midnight part and damn, someone really likes fucking with their characters. I am grateful Idris is tired of seeing all that death, and the corrupted magic of these monsters that gravely destroyed his family and life. 

The ending of Part two is depressing ala the Early Morning scene. I have to say, I feel sorry for poor Idris.

Now onto Part 3 of Chapter 14.

Aww poor, Idris, at least he finally found Gertrude and one of the Great Cities. The realization all that wasn't a dream hit him like a ton of bricks. Cosmo City is definitely different to other cities, pastels and etc.

The Collab between Akaya & AngelofOctober, which is called Chapter 15: A Friendship Twinkling.

I loved the entire chapter 15, collab it was adorable. And lol, at the tag scene, Idris was faster than a Half-Celestial. xD

But it was still sad scene of affairs.

Chapter 16: Short and sweet and will be in the IC proper. xD

Theme Song: Very good. I do like the swamp sounds. I'll probably listen to it fully when I am not being hounded by RL. >.<;

Misc Info, is the last part of the profile I have to look over. xD

I liked the first part of the misc info, mostly the part of his ways of communication.

I like the pictures and the minor histories of each family tree, that ties into Idris' bloodline.

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[@deadpixel101]'s Sheet Review

Simon Agrippa Lafayette, is he called, the name rolls right of the tongue. I do like the headshot you drew deadpixel. :)

[b]Species[/b]:

I do like the species description of what Simon is and everything, it's very well thought out.

[b]Description[/b]:

Onto the Description! I like the description, it's pretty neat, it seems like he gets into fights a lot. xD

I do like the orange color for the categories, its pretty. :3

[b]Persona[/b]: 

Onto the Persona! Feels like I am playing a video game when I say that, oh wait, Persona series of video games.

Simon seems like a very good person to be around, and is a very cheery silk-moth-folk guy. (The Strengths)

I like Simon's flaws, they are inventive and hilarious. Holding something over someone's head because they got a victory over them. XD

I like his hobbies, in terms of tapping his foot, clicking noises with his tongue. And the obsessiveness of keeping something safe, that is beautiful.

The Skills, Engineer, that's good to know, in terms of having something broken fixed. I wouldn't want to be snipe'd by Simon's Eagle-Eyed precision. Quiet sneaky marksmen are very hard to come by. I do like he's patient.

[b]Battle Profile[/b]: 

Focal Crystal: I like where the focal crystal sits in his sniper rifle. And the orange smooth and flat feels like a coin of some kind.

Special Equipment: 
The Longshot - Kinda reminds me of a sniper rifle in a D&D Scenario; ala Critical Role. Still a wonderful weapon nonetheless.

Buddy - That's pretty nifty tool box. In terms of its ability anyways.

Equipment: 

I especially likes the Turret Parts, he carries, it kinda reminds me of turrets you see in modern games, but they definitely aren't modern in this.

The Weapons: Wack! [i]knocks out someone.[/i] With my massive Bolt Wrench. XD

And Brass Knuckles very nice.

The Special Attack: I like that ability for his species, in terms of 2 minutes of linear flight. Since it feels like an ability that all Silk-moth-folk have, unless I am mistaken. xD

[b]Magic Profile[/b]: 

Spell book kinda feels like a one of those small books you write notes in, about things, since it fits into a breast-pocket.

Workshop Magic! Friendship is very magical. Sorry I had to make a MLP reference. >.>;

The Lesser Spells.

I do like the three lesser spells in this section. The speed boost, making a bullet bounce in midair without hitting into anything, and Brain Drain sounds quite fun besides the negatives of constantly using it.

The One and Only Medium Spell.

Oo, clockwork turrets, neat. I love the animate arms spell in its totality.

Misc Battle Info, Snipers are usually in the back, with suppressing fire, and that's definitely what Simon is.

[b]Your Tale[/b]: 

I loved the tale, kinda sad that he lost his parents to some horrible monster. And that he has been living with Gretude for 5 years before the IC started. 

The song you picked, fits his engineering background ala Clocks.