Simon Review

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- The only thing that threw me off a bit was that every first paragraph/sentence from the strength section down. The reason for this is that it went from a masculine verbiage with 'Simon, his, him' to genderless 'they' and I didn't really see why.

Overall

What I had to say above isn't a really big deal but it just kind of made me have to re-read when it switched between the two. I really love the creativity with this profile and the thought put into the species itself. I like that his magic is centered a main theme of his inventing and that his focus crystal is in one of his weapons. I really love that he got his passions most likely from his parents and that he took their deaths so much that Simon almost let himself die from distress. All around I really love this character and marksmen are great to have! I have a feeling that he will be able to cheer some of the group up and maybe frustrate them a bit XD