[@Rune_Alchemist]
[i]”Khajiit has wares, if you have coin”[/i]. And then the Fallout reference? You know, now that I think about it, Mie could totally be a character in a Bethesda game.

Mie Yukina is an excellent name for your character. Surely this was intentional?

Anyways, let’s get to business.

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[b]Demi-Human[/b]
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Please specify her full race, like is she a kitsune or a cat girl. These are the important questions my dude.

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Appearance is A-Ok. Just like personality, this is one of those things that I think it’d be silly to discuss :P

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Personality is fine. She does seem like a bit of rapscallion, but from a plot perspective that’s perfect :P

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Bio is awesome! You really went into detail, and that’s great!

I’m just curious, exactly how wealthy is she now? Are we talking Anastasia level of wealthy, or just a well off merchant? By the looks of things, I’d think the second one, but it’s always good to clarify :)

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All in all, excellent sheet. There was very little to comment on, which is arguably a good thing :P. Once the OOC is up, she’ll be accepted. I look forward to her participation in the roleplay. 

Thanks for applying!

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[@ERode]

Kimura Yuuki. 

This guys our resident goof-ball? He’s calm and unimposing, but endearing nonetheless. It seems like he has a lot on his plate though. By the looks of things, he’s a mage too. He’ll be quite the wizard, I imagine.

Anyways, here you go.

[hider=Kimura Yuuki]

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[b]???[sub]Magical Affinity[/sub][/b]
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Now, you’ve PM’d me about this. The god’s are not that kind. If you don’t ask for something, you won’t get it. Except those times when you do…

What I’m trying to say, is that if you want your character to have magics, you gots to tell me. 

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[b][s]Human[/s][/b]
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Small detail, but just out of curiosity: what does the strikethrough mean?

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Appearance is fine. I must say though, he’s pretty adorable in the picture; but the written part just hammers it in.

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Personality is fine. After reading the bio, ouch. Poor dude can’t catch a break, can he.

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I love this backstory too! Actually, it sort of reminds me of Subaru in the anime. Only a little bit though. 

Very sad backstory though. The poor dude finally found a girl, and got dragged into a fantasy world. Oh well, maybe there’ll be an [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JfUM5xHUY4M]opportunity to relax in this new world[/url]

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On a clear, starry night, he found himself on a bright, sunny day.
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I love the poetry at the end. It’s all good, but that last line is perfect. It’s so clever.

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[b][u]Magics[/u][/b]
63
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Interesting number.

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[b][u]Abstract Magics[/u][/b]
???
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[img]http://www.lostseed.com/extras/free-graphics/images/jesus-pictures/god-sad-over-earth.jpg[/img]

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Excellent taste in music btw. Just fix the ??? and you’ll be accepted once the OOC is up.

Thanks for applying.

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[@catchamber]
Since your sheet isn't finished yet, I'll wait for it's completion before I do anything with it.

[@BrokenPromise]
We chatted about things. We'll probably figure things out some time this week.

[@Tenma Tendo]
I'd love to check out your sheet, but it'll have to wait until tomorrow. 


Sorry for the late response. I had intended to get home about five hours ago and finish everything a while after, but I had to stay at work for a couple extra hours so things got really wonky. Everything should be good now though.