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Aside from what Akay has already said, and some misspelling I noticed (it really wasn't anything big), I think there's no problem. I just imagine that the 'short while' for his burst of speed would mean around a few seconds correct? Like, within one or two posts?

In any case, just like the ohters, I love him. And him being a marksman with a sick sniper rifle is an added bonus. I have a soft spot for them. I like his magic and it's a good idea to have a long range user among them since I think most are close-ranged fighters (well, Idris is a trapper but that's a whole other thing) aside from Idris. The spells look good to me aside from that one question I had. I very much look forward to see how he is written in the IC and how he interacts with others.