[@Polaris North]

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-Description: 

Lovely job granting me a visual. Something about the way you've written most of your sheet made be play rather cinematic scenes in my head. Another example of weaving more than just a raw list into your CS. Every section has some bit of story or soul. 

-Personality: 

Especially like the mention of little habits in the extras, they are some of my favorite aspects of making characters: The granular. 

-Skills: 

Very fitting for his entire background and persona. 

-Battle Profile: 

I enjoy the reliance on environmental factors that change your abilities. It will keep things interesting. Also good to have someone leaning more to the sensible side in our party. 

-Magic Profile: 

You obviously knew what you wanted Francis to do. His kit is comprehensive and again: Made me play animations in my head, of him switching the enchantments on the fly. 

-Tale:

You leave a lot of room for growth, which is the only point of a story. I look forward to his development in game. 

-Misc/General: 

Again I am left with little to say; you've obviously polished the CS and your grammar is correct. A lovely sheet for a lovely character.
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