[@Polaris North]'s Character Review

Francis Edmund Breaux - His name sounds a bit french inspired. :)

I do like the picture you picked out for him. Yay, a fellow human! Since we lost a human and he's two years older than Rhaya.

[b]Description[/b]: 

That's a great description for someone with a french sounding first and last name. I enjoyed how it went through somethings alike his noble aura, his eyes, his clothing, his style of training (fencer), and his voice. Pretty great so far. I need to dig deeper to see the whole thing.

[b]Persona[/b]: 

I am now on his persona, which includes, his strengths, flaws, hobbies, and skills. Let's see if these incite excitement in my typing or whatever I come up with. Reading is such fun, should really do more of it. xD

Strengths - His strengths are completely nice and well passive, see what I did there? It makes me as if I knew him from the beginning. At least let's see what his flaws are next.

Flaws - Aww, that's sad, he's a perfectionist, shut off his emotions and gets really angry if provoked. At least, the orphans don't know how to push his buttons. Now its onto his hobbies, which will see more into what he likes.

Neutral - I like his hobbies, and that he's happy with the orphans, it's very nice really to have someone who only likes to read or play with instruments but mostly be by himself. Now its onto the last part of Francis' persona, which are the skills that Francis is great at.

Skills - 

The skills above this small error, are great and I do like their descriptions. I have found a small error, in one of his skills.

[quote]He cna play them rather well.[/quote]

Where did the can go, down the street to play with the CNA? xD

Other than that Instrumentalist is great.

I do like his Enchantment Aura Reading skill, it's very interesting, and ties pretty into his magic style pretty nicely.

Aww, I do like his crafting skill, it's quite great. Mostly because of his giving gifts, with his woodcarvings. :)

I do like his last skill too. 

[b]Battle Profile[/b]:

The Battle Profile has arrived, into my sights and time to review the interesting side of his things.

Focal Crystal - First thing, I got to say, I like the picture you picked for the Crystal Obelisk. And the description of the focal crystal is pretty nice too.

Special Equipment - 

The Silver Pendant, has a simple and eloquent description. The description of its ability is great, I do like there has to be verbal confirmation from the person being affected by it.

The Enchanted Cloak, I like the description of the cloak itself. It is definitely for a nobleman or woman to wear. I like the descriptive ability it holds and its very nice, in the protection, though it cannot really take that many blows.

Equipment - I like all the equipment he has on him especially the 'F' etched on the Wooden Token, with another and a 'C' on it as well. I have a hint of what that is, his first name with Gertude's last name on it.

Weapons - Slash, Slash, Slash, how many slash and stabbing noises can I make? Because there's two sword based weapons in here, one is his pride and joy from his family days. The other is a lucky charm, which is a knife. Kinda feel like I want to make "Now, this is a knife! Reference." Oh wait, just did that.

[b]Magic Profile[/b]: 

Spellbook - I love the picture for the spell book and its description is pretty nifty since it can change shape. xD

School of Focus - Enchantments, I can give you many things for your troubles. Enchantments are pretty nifty if you think about it. Ala, I like the school you've picked for your character.

Spells: 
Lesser Spells - 

I love the first part of your all your character's enchantments ala, what he says to activate the enchantment. In terms of your lesser spells.

The Fire Enchantment - I liked its description of what it does to specifically make a blade to catch fire to strike at foes.

The Sharpening Enchantment - I loved the ending part of the description of what it says, don't show off you dolt! Or you might lose an arm. That was quite funny nonetheless and its very good to know how long it lasts for too.

The Durability Enchantment - This is very nice description of the enchantment, it showed a bit of the history behind it as well it showed how it was refined so it would stop hurting the original user of said spell. This entire enchantment is very well done.

Medium Spells - 

I love the first part of your all your character's enchantments ala, what he says to activate the enchantment. In terms of your medium spells.

The Torch Enchantment - First and foremost, can I fax you a letter? Called Lumen Fax, it's pretty bright to say the least. Great, description again, I like how it can be reapplied before it completely fades. Nifty, trick.

The Bonding Enchantment - 

[quote]When the enchanter has bonded enough with an object, they can perform this enchatnment on it.[/quote]

Misspelled Enchantment in this sentence. I notice these things pretty easily. Other than that misspelling, the spell's description is pretty nice and making the weapon or anything appear in the hand if they are at least in a four meter radius around said object.

Misc Battle Info - I do like he uses his enchantments fully to his abilities, and he can give his enchantments to others as a form of support.

[b]Your Tale[/b]: 

Arrival - Aww, that was a sad depressing story. The curse finally showed up and everyone of his family died, that was pretty daunting. I have to say curses are such sweet sorrow but I hope he gets through to find who cursed him and kick her ass. xD

Theme Song - I like the description before you click it to listen to the song you've picked for your character. I like the theme song of how much I listened to it. Good job in picking "No One is Alone."

Misc - The Royal Family is awaiting for someone to return, seems odd. But I guess its better than nothing. They want the family that was about the crops, to be apart of them again. The Galaxy Villa sounds like a nice place to live. Even though the Breaux's family only now has a mansion to their name, but that's about it.