[@Tenma Tendo] [s]Can’t say I was a huge fan of the visual novel. This Grisaia looks alright though.[/s] That wasn't even funny but I'm keeping it. Alright. Let’s take a look at this. [hider=Grisaia Vertti] [quote] the one on the right [/quote] [url=https://i.imgur.com/3uOXrTB.png]Gotchu fam.[/url] [hr] Oh boy. By the looks of this description, we’re in for quite a ride :P [hr] Appearance 👍 [hr] Personality 👍 [hr] [quote] Gusteka [/quote] Ah, someone’s read the novels :P. Or the wiki. Either or is great! [quote] Grisaia and all the other Demi-Human children were plucked away from their foster family to train and participate in said war [/quote] The Demi Human war was a civil war in Lugnica. However, it is entirely possible for a third party to have been recruiting in Gusteka. Everything else in the backstory looks good. I gotta say though, if Kimura had it tough, I don’t even know how to describe what happened to Grisaia [hr] [quote] [u][b]Magics[/b][/u] 88 (Spirit Magic) [/quote] Alright. This means he has the potentially to be a pretty powerful spirit arts user. Like, city buster level if he really needed to destroy a city. I just want to make sure you understand this, so please confirm when you reply. [hr] [quote] The draw backs of this ability is that attacks on the barriers can cause equivalent damage to Grisaia's mind to the point of losing consciousness [/quote] Let’s define this in more direct terms. This is a powerful divine protection, but then again, it not vital to this character for him to be having one so I don’t feel bad about suggesting a nerf. A strong attack is the type of attack that’d eviscerate a crowd of people. Say, Roswaals inferno. That’ll be his limit before he goes unconscious. A medium attack is the type of attack that’d cause someone to die if they’re hit with it. Say, Rem’s giant shard of ice. Grisaia’s barrier can take three of these before they’re knocked unconscious. In dire situations, they might be able to withstand up to five or maybe even more. A light attack is a heavy sweep with a sword. The type of thing that can be blocked with a shield. Grisaia can take up to 15 of these attacks before going unconscious. If the situation was dire, he may be able to hold up to 25 of these attacks before going unconscious. The inbetween stage will cause him to become pretty woozy, so he might have a headache after most fights when he uses his barriers. I know this seems like it unnecessarily nerfs him, but just like Ashton, this guy is perfectly capable of fighting for himself even with a nerf. I’m not setting my proposal in stone, if you have a different idea for a nerf that is. Otherwise, his divine protection is fine. [hr] Do you still have me on discord? If you do, please PM me about the spirits and we can talk about what needs to be done. They’re fine to have, but there’s an application I’ll be using in the OOC that I’m still working on so I’d just like to check some things with you. [hr] Once again, music is phenomenal. Thanks for applying. [/hider] Once you touch upon the things highlighted, and speak to me, Grisaia will be accepted. [hr] [@FamishedPants] alright they’re banned [hr] [@Althiel] [s]sorry dude i have to ban you :([/s] Edit : We tried, didn't work. Sorry. [hr] @Everybody I’m going to wait to read over any more sheets until the OOC is finished tomorrow, so if you’ve recently submitted a character sheet please hang tight until then. Also, I’ve created a discord server for us all to chat in. All except for FamishedPants are invited : https://discord.gg/dbHBgjp Announcements and anything important will still happen on the guild.