[quote=@Retired]
Some aspects seem jarring when compared to the rest, and concepts and elements are introduced but left with little to no explanation, for example. While it's not difficult to read what is written, I'm not being immersed, and I often find myself displaced and taken out of the experience due to the aforementioned things. 
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My last post was supposed to have an 'Asgardians of the Galaxy' segment but it wasn't contributing anything to the overall post and just served as a jarring change of focus.

It's coming but not yet haha