The thread's not dead, haha. I've gotten a few PMs concerning characters that haven't been posted here, and there's a handful of folks that are being considered as players. Everyone will get an [@] and a PM if necessary.

Please put your sheet in a hider. Critique below!

[hider=Boran Brenton (Critique, Incomplete)]Firstly, on traits/flaws: You should actually have two traits and two flaws total. As the big page says under flaws and traits: Every character gets 2 traits baseline, and every character gets 1 flaw baseline. The flaw you do have is good, but don't forget to include another one and two traits!

On equipment, having weapons drawn from your back can actually be really difficult. See: videos online explaining how hard it is to draw swords from your back. Having his axe at his hip in that noose most of the time makes plenty of sense. Likewise, the buckler would probably make the most sense attached to the belt. How big is that axe, by the way? What sort of axe is it? His armor and other equipment all make good sense.

Obviously, you haven't filled out proficiencies, but that's fine. You're not finished yet. No worries, my dude!

I like his backstory. It's short, conveys a pretty cool feel, and clearly establishes both who he was and who he is. It's good! I'll leave it at that.

Please tell me when you're finished. Also make the edits I suggested, please![/hider]