[quote=@AndyC] Thanks! I had initially thought about directly mentioning the Sentinels (and the idea that Irons accepted the military contract so that his relatively small company could grow enough to compete with Stark), but I didn't want to step on toes. Sometimes leaving the dots to be connected later is better than connecting them right away. Well, he's not called Grammar Man. [/quote] Agreed, and I like that that's how you ended up doing it. If he were, I'd have applied to be him.