[quote=@Assallya]
I was the one to suggest the orc inclusion as plantation workers.  However I rather suggested that the orcs (which I was comparing to Tolkien, not Warhammer) had been defeated yet again by the other races on one of their repeated crusades of pillaging and plunder. 

Unlike preyed upon Africans the thought was that the orcs put themselves in their position of indentured servitude through their constant warmongering.  This allows for higher minded characters to question the wisdom of the deplorable situation and maybe seek an alternative solution.

One must have evil to tell a story of good conquering evil.
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So basically I should have an Orc villain that's perhaps a leader of a band of what would be Desperadoes? I mean, I could make an antagonist like this if necessary. I actually wanted to base the orcs in this more akin to Warcraft and Skyrim orcs, they can be sympathetic and likeable to even humans. This is why basically the United States government saw this as an injustice and burnt this fictional Atlanta to the ground, (probably burning all the vampires or just killing all the dark elves.)

I'm looking for ways to make this better however, I would like help on making this story better. I just have a lot on my plate offline with college and life so I'm sort of frantic with posting.