[quote=Azseth] I thought Abel is just going crazy. The shifts from scene to scene in odd ways make me think a lot of his views are distorted perceptions and thoughts.Just my opinion.Az [/quote] Actually that's how I saw him too after I wrote the first scene. It was really difficult to finish my second post because I had to make it seem like that's just how he sees the world. I wanted to portray someone who isn't crazy but actually functions like that. But then every time I started writing for him, the crazy just flowed. I had him clapping and laughing at nothing before i rewrote the entire post. He comes off more dangerous the way he is now than they way I had him.