[quote=@Dr Catfish]
Sorry for any errors or weird words where they shoulsnt be. I typed it on mobile. Anywhere there it is ^-^
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Hey! I like the sheet so far, but we were planning on keeping enchantments for later and not having them as starting items, to allow for some nice equipment progress. Also we have a lot more info on Baccum coming up that I think you'll like. 

Also I feel like this character would walk like this: [url]https://youtu.be/bt3CkXQl0uw?t=1m33s[/url]

Only other criticism I have, that I'm sure he probably gets a lot: if you use one spear to retaliate and one spear to parry (one that is also intended as a kinetic blocker), wouldn't it just be easier, more effective and quicker to use shield and spear, whose function is similar to the very enchantment you wanted anyways. Another criticism is the backstory, it was fine up until pope dream eating shamans and the punishment system, it just makes no sense that the punishment for consensual sex was death but coercive sexual offenses was a slap on the wrist. I get that it's more my fault for not explaining the shamans more, but I'll have the entire Baccum info up soon, then we can rework the background a little bit to fit a bit more, but for now hold tight and mend the backstory. (The spears are fine as they are [ minus the magic] , I just wanted to point it out)


[@Briza] LOOKS GOOD TO ME, KEEP AT IT BRIZAAAAAAAAAAA.