[@FoxSoxs] That deck is looking a [i]lot[/i] better, yeah. Personally not a fan of a card like Trap Hole because it's so one-note, but it's not like your deck is filled with cards that stop your opponent from playing YGO. You didn't really have to list every possible card they could use though, lol. Like Cosmos said, it wouldn't be out of the question to look to cards outside your decklist for when we get around to actually scripting.

[@Tenma Tendo] I can't speak for what Satoshi thinks and I won't (he's mainly the guy that'll judge whether or not your actual character is good or not), but what you have so far looks pretty alright to me. Never a fan of when the shown S/T cards are floodgates or play stoppers and I'm seriously questioning why people still think they need +0 cards like Allure, but the deck overall is still fine enough.

You're still going to need to get the other four up and running, though, because a sheet is judged as a whole, not based off one subsection. If you'll take a look at the other top 5's in already accepted sheets, though, you'll see they don't have to be nearly as detailed as your main duelist.