[quote=@CrazyFennec] Their True Name- Blake ([color=skyblue][b]No last name?[/b][/color]) Their Stage Name- Ice King Their Appearance [img]https://a.wattpad.com/cover/58873384-288-k762527.jpg[/img] The Date they Joined the Circus-May 13th, 2017 The Act they perform when not on the combat team-Ice creater/manipulater. ([Color=skyblue][b]It's supposed to be their act, not their powers. I wouldn't have had to point this out if it was something like "Ice Sculptor", which it probably is according to Blake's audition.[/b][/color]) Compulsion-Ha can't have any part of his skin in direct sunlight. ([Color=skyblue][b]*He. Sorry, habit. Does he have an umbrella with him? Or anything to cover his skin? Cause this seems like an unfair compulsion if he doesn't.[/b][/color]) Why they Joined the Circus-To escape his overly controlling parents who thought they knew what was best for him. ([Color=skyblue][b]Kinda edgy. Really, this doesn't seem like a good reason to join the circus imo.[/b][/color]) Their Biography-Blake had a very normal life. He had good grades and a few close friends. Art was his favorite subject in school followed by literature. Blake and his parents often butted heads on where he was going in life and some current life choices. His parents wanted him to join the army and continue the family tradition of being in the military. One day Blake discovered his parents planed on sending him to a juvenile bootcamp. When his mom and dad left the house to go shopping Blake packed up some belongings and, with some stolen money left home to make a new life for his self. A few weeks later Blake came across a circus and was approached by the ringleader. ([Color=skyblue][b]So Blake decided to run away from home so he didn't have to go to military school? Again, kinda edgy.[/b][/color]) Their Connections-Need to talk to others first. Their Audition-I took my kid outside of the main tent after the wonderful displays of feats by the main preformers. [color=007236]"Let's look around a little more but then we need to go back home."[/color] The kids tried to get their dad to stay longer but he didn't budge. Near the edge of the carnivalcarnival stood a tent with a sigh that read "Ice Kings lair. Enter at your own pace.". The father lead his daughter to the tent and looked inside. In the tent was dozens of figurines made of ice on display with a single pale young man. [color=6ecff6]"Please, come in and look around."[/color] The guy said while beckoning us in. I entered the tent with my little girl and started to look at the ice sculptures. The air inside the tent was only slightly cooler then outside but didn't seem to affect any of the sculptures. Every ice figure I examined had incredible detail for their size. Each one was small enough to fit in the palm of my hand and none of them had any price tags or label on them. Suddenly I heard a voice right next to me. [color=6ecff6]"If you're wondering how much they are they are not for sale. I will allow you to take one of your choosing. And no I didn't read your mind. It's just that that is most often what I get asked first."[/color] Before I could respond I hear a gasp from my daughter and something hit the ground. I look over to see an ice horse broken on the dirt floor of the tent but before I could apologize the man just laughs and walks towards my daughter. She looks up to the stranger with tears starting to form. [color=f6989d]"I am sorry"[/color] [color=6ecff6]"It's OK. No need to cry little one."[/color] He picks up the pieces and holds them in his palm. [color=6ecff6]"Watch this."[/color] He says. Placing his other hand over the broken horse, pressed his hands together and then lifted it to reveal the horse intact. My daughter clapped as I tried to figure out how he did that. He grabs a small plastic container and stand and puts the horse in it. [color=6ecff6]"Take this as a token of change. Even if things seem dark and gloomy now they will change for the better. I'm sure of it"[/color] I take the gift and look it over. [color=007236]"C'mon sweetie. Thank the man and let's go home."[/color] The girl said her goodbyes as well started to leave. [color=6ecff6]"Don't forget it will only last a little over two hours before you have to freeze it again.[/color] [/quote] Other than the writing quality that seems to belong in the free section, my comments are in the quoted cs.