Hi all! I know I'm a bit late to the party, but here's my character. I'll fancy it up a bit, add a nice theme colour and all that, but mostly I'd love to hear people's feedback on my character as soon as possible so I can fix anything that may be needed :) [hider=Ichiban Koyokeiro/Lemon Soda] [center][h2]Real World Character[/h2][/center] [b]Name[/b]: Ichiban Koyokeiro [b]Age[/b]: 24 [b]Gender[/b]: Male [hider=Appearance: ] [img]https://i.imgur.com/enHmqhF.jpg[/img][/hider] [b]Short Bio[/b]: An only child born into a music loving family he found a niche in the online community making original music to footage from his GBO exploits. Being more concerned with making interesting videos over killing players or enemies Ichiban worked on building his character with survivability and terrain traversal in mind. Focussing on jumping and vehicle use, he soon started taking pictures and video of him getting to unique vantage points and looking at the scenery that others were simply not specced in the right way to view. [center][h2]Gun Burst Online Character[/h2][/center] [b]Name[/b]: [Lemon Soda] [b]Gender[/b]: Male [hider=Appearance:] [img]https://i.imgur.com/Tqceh72.jpg[/img][/hider] [b]Level[/b]: 90 [b]Skills[/b]: - Parkour [1000/1000] - Exotic Weapon Proficiency (Drone Control) [1000/1000] - Piloting [800/1000] - Tracking [200/1000] - Weapon Proficiency (Machine Pistol) [900/1000] - Hand to Hand combat [500/1000] - Repair [100/1000] - Others [500] [b]Specs[/b]: - Improved Jumping x2 - Improved Reflexes - Remote Control - Quick Reload – reduces reload time - Tuck and Roll – reduces fall damage - Vehicular Homicide – increases damage dealt by vehicles piloted by the user [b]Signature Weapon/Combat Style[/b]: Two independent assault drones are the primary method of attack, often sent away from Jukebox and hidden while he uses a machine pistol as his weapon. Alternatively, Jukebox will use the drones as stepping stones using a combination of Improved Jumping, Improved Reflexes and Parkour to effectively ‘triple jump’ to reach terrain not normally accessible and using it as a vantage point. Alternatively crashing vehicles into the enemy tends to work. [b]Inventory[/b]: MAC-11 MAC-11 ammunition x3 Flashbang Grenades Two Assault Class [url=https://d1u5p3l4wpay3k.cloudfront.net/shadowrun_wikickstart/0/03/Generic_drone_guardian.png?version=dc2d359646b6edc26b248ecdd54f8bcc]“Guardian”[/url] drones – each drone equipped with the equivalent of a high calibre pistol and a smoke grenade Armor transmogged to look like casual wear of blue jeans, t-shirt and jacket Yellow tinted anti-flash hunting glasses. An old duelling flintlock pistol [for style points] Knuckle dusters 2,564 Credits 705 Photonic Crystals [hider=Sample Post:] Ichiban, sorry “Lemon Soda”, was looking up at a half-ruined building and specifically a particularly sturdy looking piece of rebar sticking out of a wall ten stories above his head. As was fitting for a war zone map, the stairs were half destroyed and instead of a north east corner roof there was a hole. Tying his digital shoelaces out of habit more than any in game effect it would bring Lemon summoned his two Guardian Assault Drones and had them enter the building ahead of him. No shout of shock or surprise at the drones entering the first floor seemed like a good sign so MAC-11 loose in his hand, he wandered the bottom floor. The first floor itself was where all the debris and crap from the upper floors naturally settled. However, the way the boxes were arranged under a hole leading to the second floor raised an eyebrow, activating his tracking Skill the scrape marks made by the box moving that had been hidden under concrete dust glowed with a pinkish red light. [i]Not just level design. Someone went up[/i]. Going back outside Lemon looked at the second-floor window and clambered up a busted streetlight nearby, not feeling confident enough to just follow a potential player’s path. His two levels of Improved Jumping making it so that he easily stepped through the outside window and landed on the floor. Accidentally kicking some rubble as he landed Lemon froze as he waited for a player to react to the sound and wasn’t disappointed. Around near where he thought the player made path to this floor was he heard the distinctive sound of a rifle being raised and boots creeping towards him. Calling one of his drones to his back right shoulder, Lemon had the other slowly float up from the hole the player turned their back on to inspect the noise. Banking a flashbang of a door frame and into the room the sound of a player yelling “Fu-!” could be heard before his started ringing and the drone at the player’s back opened fire. Stepping out into the room, Lemon emptied an entire clip from his MAC-11 into the player and watched them pass into the digital afterlife as an timer went off in his ear. “Shit, I won’t make it in time for the Golden Hour… I suppose I better come back tomorrow…” [/hider] [/hider]