[quote=@Hellis] [@Cleverbird] Great work. So watch me ruin it for you a bit. We do not start out with exosuits, sorry. And you need to put one of the six origin types in. For the skills you chose one primary, two secondary. You're writing is exemplary, I think mayhaps you got a bit to excited and glossed over the charachter creation notes. haha. [/quote] That's fine! I figured if I went with a less technologically advanced suit, it might pass... But I don't mind stripping it! As for origin, I did put that in her sheet. It's all on the left side: originally born into Saika Unions, she then became a Date Robin. As for skills, that's now easily solved by stripping her of her Exo suit :D