[@Letter Bee]

Ashton now fits more in line with the rest of the non-natives. Flame does as well, and his backstory is an improvement. The fact that they are still lovers could pose a problem, but I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt on that. So long as they aren't exclusively interacting with each other all the time.

I am still unsure if I'm going to award a magical boy transformation to both of them. A transformation DB would be quite rare (even among Dbs, which are suppose to be rare), and awarding a second one to ashton's boyfriend feels like something that is more rare than winning the power ball lottery. That's one in a hundred-and-seventy-five-million for anyone wondering. Also to keep in mind that how the character behaves and trains will determine the type of DB he gets. Like Ashton will probably get his “ideal image” if he has an ideal he's constantly striving for. Maybe Flame could have something that serves the same purpose but is a bit different, as he seems more arrogant and probably doesn't have an ideal form.  I still say that donning actual costumes would be the easiest way to accomplish this.

However, they are both accepted. You may post them in the character tab.  

[@FamishedPants]

We talked about his ability to learn, so that's fine.

I see you only lowered one of his scores below C like I asked, which is ok. But because Alistair is starting with two elements, he is going to see growth much slower than the other non-natives, and even some of the natives. This is to account for the extra magical discipline he's learning.

But Alistair Archibald is accepted. You may post them in the character tab.

[@Erode]

I think you know what the class section is for, and I'd like it filled out correctly.

I believe Alice gave you the rundown on your strange magic set up, so if you insist to continue this route, all I can say is that you've been warned,

Everything else appears to be in order however.

[@Phonic]

Looks good. Fredehildr “Frede” Merogasque is accepted. You may post them in the character tab.

[@Seirei No Hai]

Gris Ayt Forye may be posted in the character tab now.

Elque Ayt Forye looks good. Much like with Letter Bee's characters, it is not ideal that you have two characters that know each other so well. But if they aren't always together this shouldn't be a problem. You can post her in the character tab as well.

Since the RP hasn't started yet, I'm going to hold off on giving people more than 2 characters until we see how everything is.

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Boom, more accepts!

I noticed a few non-natives forgot to include return by death as an abstract magic. Make sure to add that to your sheets.