[quote=@Reflection] The ??? ranks were mostly because they're must the means of utilizing genjutsu. Since I don't want to get hyper specific with what is essentially illusions that can change depending on the setting. [/quote] So you're saying that this genjutsu can not only insta-kill anyone it touches and effect all 5 of the senses, but that you can change the type of illusion cast at will? No matter how you slice it, this genjutsu is broken and doesn't even really follow genjutsu rules in the first place. While the tendency to require highly specific genjutsu techniques is a hassle that we as gm's are trying to figure out(seriously, do we need a whole jutsu slot just to change words on a sign) that doesn't mean you can just pull this custom one out of your ass that has absolutely no real counters(It would be piss easy for her to just hide somewhere to avoid getting hit for the duration of this jutsu and that is not okay) then lock it all up behind some split-personality seal and call it a day. You could have it so she has to perform a ten-minute Raindance to use and it still wouldn't be anything close to acceptable for a jonin character, much less a genin. Speaking of that split personality. . . [quote=Reflection] As for the reincarnation thing, it's a split personality. She's not actually a reincarnation. Those of the Kurama clan with superior genjutsu power all form split personalities, and the clan believes these split personalities are their ancestors, and thus the personality takes after that belief. [/quote] I can buy this, even though I'm 95% sure that isn't how split-personalities work, it's somewhat thematic and adds some culture to the clan. Doesn't even come close to being a good excuse for her to be as powerful as you are making her. [i]Not in the slightest[/i]. You see, I want you to look at every other app on the OOC, and I mean [i]really[/i] look them over. Then, I want you to look at yours. Prodigy or not, she is of a level of power that is frankly ridiculous for what we have here. A character her age isn't going to be killing a chunin, much less any of the Kage. So when you go to tweak the abilities, you need to crank that power dial back. Like, alllllll the way back. No ifs, ands, or buts. Also, don't use the split personality as a limiter, because it's not a limiter When playing a character with multiple personalities, the obvious thing is that all of them will be on show sooner or later, so no matter the perceived difficulty that switching to that persona takes, it comes off as a very flimsy self-limitation that can be broken rather easily from a writing perspective without any form of growth of character whatsoever. If you want to tie abilities to the alter ego, consider this "Would this ability be acceptable if it was on the regular persona?" If yes, then go ahead. If no, then chuck it away for possible use later when your character actually grows into it. Personally, I have a few more points I want to touch on, but they're best saved for the actual review. This was just a bit of advice so that when you've reworked her, she gets a fair shot of getting accepted like everyone else. Jutsu limit for prodigies is 3 C's, a few D's, and the academy techniques. I'm not sure if you were aware of that limitation, but it is a very hard limit that would need a much, much stronger case then "locked behind a split-personality" to get through. I hope you found this advice to be helpful(despite it being somewhat ramblely) and I thank you for taking the time to read this.