[@Zynros] The flaws section on the first page cuts off mid-sentence (I assume you could scroll when you were editting it, but I couldn't while viewing). Fix that and finish off the rest, and you're good to go.

[@Cu Chulainn] Yeah, that's fine.

[@rocketrobie2] I don't mind if you're new, I can help whenever you need it and so might some of the others.

[@Duthguy] Your listed ideal is more like a bond. Ideals are generally higher, less tangible concepts such as freedom or fairness. Also, 1st level clerics only have two 1st level spell slots, not three.