2 months later...a reply! Wow. That took wayy too long. Now, another long overdo response: The information on Lion's Ridge is wonderful. Everything is so useful, creative, and organized. I'm reading over everything again for a refresher. The insignias are awesome too, and beautifully designed! So far, everything has made sense to me so I don't see anything that needs fixing. For Lydia's parents, I believe we decided they will be the highest rank or close to it. I originally intended for Jason to be one of the highest ranked ones, but then I thought it might make more sense if he was lower than Lydia's parents. That would give him the incentive to mislead Lydia into thinking he likes her, so he can get in good with her parents (in the hopes that they would pull some strings to boost his rank). :P Let me know what you think about that approach. I think we talked about it before, but did we ever decide on what rank our girls would be? (Apologies for me taking me so long to decide on ranks for everyone. I just want to make sure they would make sense. Both for their characters, and the story).