Lasersquid captured more of my interest with his character being set in a supposed fantasy setting, yet there are instances where I have my doubts and concerns. For example, Lasersquid speaks of Anarast's parents being publicly executed being a driving factor for him, but I don't see any information regarding it within Anarast's backstory. Later on, Lasersquid says that the captain was a smart man, and "didn’t want to make the men hate him, but rather to make them know discipline." If the previous captain was supposedly intelligent, one would think whipping his crew five hundred and fifty three times in one day might not be the best course of action. Then, the incident with the pirate ship--would a group of pirates be so keen to listen to a 14 or so year old, even with his silver tongue?

These are just pieces that stood out to me the most, and other voters may have different views on the above. Also, I do believe Lasersquid forgot one of the requirements (the pirate name), unless Anarast is feared by his own real name.

Regarding Calle's sheet, I have some feedback as well. The character is simple (which is fine), yet the sheet feels more like a summary rather than an actual character sheet. I do think the history could have more of a "descriptive flair," rather than this and that happening. That being said, the history feels more believable to me than Anarast's, as Nelly seems to have more of a connection regarding being a pirate. Still, there are instances that I do think could be elaborated on in a similar vein as I mentioned before about the history. Nelly has a fear of snakes, but why? What triggered this fear? Not only that, Nelly has people she truly cares about (her father/husband/brother/etc), yet as of right now, they're nameless background characters.

Both sheets suffer from blocky text, as in sections, lines and/or paragraphs not being spaced out, but ultimately after reading both sheets, Calle has my vote. The sheets weren't awful by any means, and there were moments where I favored one sheet over the other, yet I think Calle has this down.