Perfectly reasonable to ask for me to not use XCOM, I was honestly being a bit lazy with that one.

Ah, misunderstood how exactly the ghost district works. Easy enough to fix.

As for why him; I'll do some rewriting, would you mind if I PM you to discuss the fine details of that?

Admittedly I was stretching a bit with the powers, so I'll drop the going ethereal thing entirely. Not quite sure what I was even thinking, but sometimes I just start writing and can't stop.

That's also probably the cause of the... inconsistent sentence flow. I wasn't terribly thrilled with it either tbh, just got lazy on the second pass of editing after wracking my brain all day just to get anything written to begin with.

As for his clothes; he has made modifications to the armor he has left. Removing insginias and other obviously identifiable marks, basically disguised it as assorted scraps that have been put together piecemeal.

All that said, I'll pop into the document where I've got my master copy and start editing; write up a better description and nix the XCOM picture.