[@Compulsive86] First and foremost, the formatting for your CS is a bit off. I recommend either displaying your images in hiders or placing them in links, spacing out your paragraphs and overall CS, and maybe putting it in a hider. The actual CS itself only has a few issues. Her background doesn't fit the world of the RP as all Magical Girls receive their magic from beings called Mascots. The second post of this OOC has a glossary of stuff regarding how the world works so you can find all this information [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4677028]here[/url]. Secondly, I would like to see more in your Sample Post as this is a Casual level RP. At least 2-3 paragraphs should be the norm for posting so I would like to see more, not just in length but in substance. Tweak and edit all of these, inform us of them, and then we'll get back to you on her acceptance.