[@Ithradine], [@Skai] - both your characters are perfect. Well done. [@Ithradine], I hope you know that one doesn't simply leave the Fire nation army and walk away. Expect some severe repercussions. ;) [@Skai], just one thing: Equalist cells haven't yet become so widespread that benders need to hide their bending. No problems in being over cautious, but Eska doesn't seem like an overcautious person. [@vancexentan] - A very interesting character, but I have a couple of concerns. Firstly, I am finding it a bit incredible that a young boy is able to teach himself advanced offensive air bending techniques with just the help of scrolls and a non-bending grandfather. I mean, I can see how his grandfather's teaching may have helped him focus his mind, but from that to becoming a functioning air bender is a bit of a stretch. In the shows, for instance, we very rarely see any character master bending without a master. Even Aang struggled with water bending before he met the Northern Water tribe master. The only notable exception is Zaheer. But he was a much older man, with years of study and experience, and with particular emphasis on Guru Lahima's teachings, not to mention his Red Lotus background. So, if you can look into that part of his backstory, it would be helpful. Maybe he grudgingly became a member of the Air nation, studied for a few years, then either broke the rules somehow or had an argument with the leaders about how to run the place and then took to wandering the world? I am not sure how you would like to go about it, but I think it needs another look. Another thing is the starting location. When RP begins, all characters start at Republic City. So you must tell me how and why Gao Xiang finds himself in Republic City. I hope you find my feedback reasonable. ^_^ [@Hushed Whispers] - Cute character! But, again, a big concern. Why does Peme choose to study weapons and fighting? I mean, the current set up of the Avatarverse in this RP is not much different from our real world. Why would the child of a fairly well-off family living in the United Earth States (a fairly stable democracy) need to learn to protect herself? The world today in the RP is a far cry from the wilder times of Avatar Aang. Travel has been made easier and safer with zeppelins and other types of aircraft. No major war has occurred in the last century. The last big 'battle' was Kuvira's invasion of Republic City, and even the older people only remember it like a legend. So what I am getting at is that your character motivation needs to be stronger. Maybe Peme loves fighting, or may be she grew up in one of those border towns that are still a bit lawless. Whatever you choose, it must reflect in her character. If you can fix that, I think Peme will become awesome. ^_^