[quote=@JELDare]
[@Inkarnate]I've added to my sections, is there any more detail you want adding?
[/quote]
I would probably merge the sentences in physical description as it looks a bit weird with only one line break. The rest seems serviceable to me unless [@Sola] has some concerns he would like addressed. 

As for [@Althiel] and [@HokumPocus], I don't really have any issues with your sheets, so, y'know. I do think the choice of [b][i]gray dialogue[/i][/b] is a bit weird, but okay.