[@Cryptek]

Suggestion to work on proof reading your post! There were points where I had to reread thing several times to get what was intended.

I don't know if English isn't your first language, but if you have a friend you can help proofread your work - or even use our own roleplay members to assist you - then I recommend you do so.

I hate having to exclude someone but if this sort of thing is persistent it can introduce problems in the flow of the roleplay :(